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Description Murtagh spun and swung his sword right at Eragon's neck. Eragon raised Zar'roc and deflected the blade, pushing Murtagh away from him. The two circled each other, eyes sparkling as they both looked for holes in the other's defense. Eragon blinked as images from Saphira flooded his mind.
Claws digging into flesh, muscle, bone. Blood splattering onto the floor, staining the dirt. Teeth ripping, crushing.
Eragon pushed her mind out of his, and saw Murtagh spinning his sword in that all-too familiar way, taking advantage of Eragon's distraction to attack. Eragon ducked and thrust Zar'roc at Murtagh's legs; he jumped, and came down slicing his sword right at Eragon's back. The Rider rolled away, and Murtagh's sword sliced deep into the dirt. Eragon leapt to his feet and ran at Murtagh; Morzan's son managed to free his sword and rose to block Eragon's attack. Mud flew off of his sword and flung into Eragon's eyes. The younger man cursed and blinked. Murtagh immediately attacked, punching Eragon in the gut with his left hand, then swinging his sword from the right. Eragon coughed as the punch landed, but rolled to the right to avoid the blade. Shifting Zar'roc to his left hand, Eragon suddenly swung upward. Murtagh stumbled backward, and Eragon used the opportunity to take back control. He feinted right, swung left, the red blade cut through the air, seeming to leave a trail of red wherever it went. Murtagh jumped back, parrying and prancing around the clearing, ducking, dodging Eragon's weapon as he looked for an opportunity to defeat the Rider. Eragon sliced at the man, aiming for his side. Murtagh grinned, and caught Zar'roc in his own blade, twisting the red rapier out of Eragon's hands. Murtagh caught the weapon, while Eragon crept backwards. Murtagh raised both swords and advanced on the now-weaponless Rider. Eragon backed into a tree and jumped, looking behind him at the large object blocking his escape. Murtagh lifted both swords up to the Rider's neck, forming an X. Both of the men froze; breathing heavily, sweat running down their faces.
"Okay, okay! You win, now get off!" Eragon yielded, and Murtagh laughed.
"Ha! Four nights in a row! Eragon, you're losing your touch." He joked, moving to sit by the fire. Eragon pouted and removed the enchantments off of the two swords.
"You just wait, tomorrow you're gonna get it!" Eragon muttered. A thud of wings could be heard above them, and both Eragon and Murtagh looked up as Saphira landed in the clearing, licking her dinner off of her muzzle. Both called out a greeting before scarfing down their dinner. Saphira looked at both of the swordsmen.
'Little one, did Murtagh beat you again?' Saphira chuckled. Eragon glared at her.
"Yes, I did! You should have seen it, he never had a chance!" Murtagh teased, laughing. Eragon shifted his glare to him.
"Tonight was a fluke. I would have won if… Saphira's hunting hadn't thrown me off." Eragon blurted. Murtagh lifted an eyebrow.
"Is that so?" Murtagh joked, Eragon lifted his chin defiantly in response.
"Of course!" Eragon looked down at his food sheepishly. Murtagh and Saphira were trying not to laugh.
"Well, then, you'll have to prove that tomorrow." Murtagh challenged, climbing into the blankets. "You lost, you take the first watch." He lay down and closed his eyes. Eragon sat, leaning against Saphira's scaly stomach. Saphira laid her head on her paws and closed her large sapphire eyes.
Eragon harrumphed into the silent forest. 'I'm going to kick him across the clearing and back tomorrow..'
Saphira opened one of her eyes to examine her Rider, then closed it again.
'Of course you will, little one.'
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Comments: 60

julia0213 In reply to ??? [2011-12-11 15:21:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!
And thanks for the fav too

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dragons-4-eva In reply to julia0213 [2011-12-16 09:49:48 +0000 UTC]

haha thts alright XD (how do u do a hug??)

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julia0213 In reply to dragons-4-eva [2011-12-16 20:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh! You type : hug : without the spaces
When you're typing a comment, right above the little checkbox that says "Remove this message after I reply" there's a little link that says Emoticons. Click on that to see a lot more codes for different emotes

Also, there are things called plz accounts for more emotes. for example, is : iconiloveyouplz : without spaces.
#Moar-PLZ-Accounts has records of lots of these codes if you see one and want to know the code for it, then just move your mouse over it, and it'll say. Like the one up there, it'll say "iloveyouplz" just add icon to the beginning, and you're all set

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dragons-4-eva In reply to julia0213 [2011-12-26 22:27:37 +0000 UTC]

oh.... THANKS SO MUCH!!!

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julia0213 In reply to dragons-4-eva [2011-12-27 02:08:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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dragons-4-eva In reply to julia0213 [2011-12-27 03:24:58 +0000 UTC]

XD

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deiinolove08 [2011-11-30 08:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Love the bromance there. Altho, I don't think they know just yet, aye?

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julia0213 In reply to deiinolove08 [2011-11-30 09:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Right. This is when they are traveling to meet the Varden

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deiinolove08 In reply to julia0213 [2011-11-30 09:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Yup, they don't know yet. I mean Eragon didn't know till the Burning Plains.

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julia0213 In reply to deiinolove08 [2011-12-02 02:34:29 +0000 UTC]

Yups Wonder if they would have acted differently, had they known...
Thanks much for the fav

(btw- I love your icon The twins were my favorite characters, though Hikaru a little more so. Reminds me more of myself than Kaoru does )

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deiinolove08 In reply to julia0213 [2011-12-04 06:35:43 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Yup, they should have known, way way back then!

(Hahaha, you should see my forum avie then! Aye, Hika-chan resembles me more than Kaoru.. I lurv Hika-chan and my bestie loves Kao-chan)

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julia0213 In reply to deiinolove08 [2011-12-04 07:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Exactly would've made thing much less complicated.
But also would've reduced the drama..

(Hmm.. Same with me.. But she's always been more level-headed than me )

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deiinolove08 In reply to julia0213 [2011-12-04 08:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Aye! So true!

(True!! Hahaha ^_^)

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infublo [2011-11-29 21:39:40 +0000 UTC]

so good! i completely thought it was after they became enemies!!! i loved when they sparred in Eragon great job!

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julia0213 In reply to infublo [2011-11-30 02:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Ah, I did my job right, then
Thanks for the fav

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infublo In reply to julia0213 [2011-11-30 02:52:55 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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S-u-b [2011-11-29 17:29:40 +0000 UTC]

its really lovely! it could slot right into the books! ^u^

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julia0213 In reply to S-u-b [2011-11-29 20:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!

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S-u-b In reply to julia0213 [2011-11-29 20:36:08 +0000 UTC]

np~

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Kalia24 [2011-09-07 10:58:43 +0000 UTC]

Really nice - a full, dynamic description - I like that

As for the typos: the ending dialogue
>>"Tonight was a fluke. I would have won if… Saphira's hunting hadn't thrown me off." Eragon blurted. Murtagh lifted an eyebrow.
"Is that so?"Eragon lifted his chin defiantly.
"Of course!" Eragon looked down at his food sheepishly. Murtagh and Saphira were trying not to laugh.<<
Came out to be a monologue in one point

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julia0213 In reply to Kalia24 [2011-09-07 22:05:29 +0000 UTC]

hmm... i had worried about that when I wrote it, but it seemed a little repetitive to keep saying who said what... maybe I should add: "Is that so?" Eragon lifted his chin defiantly in response.
Is that what you meant?

Thanks!!! and thanks for the grammar help too. I suck at grammar

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Kalia24 In reply to julia0213 [2011-09-08 07:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Nope, the dialogue itself is ok.
I mean the person - u've got Eragon speaking to Eragon I guess the bold name should be Murtagh.

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julia0213 In reply to Kalia24 [2011-09-10 04:43:30 +0000 UTC]

ooooh, i see iFail. alright, i'll review it then, and fix it
thanks!

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EragonJediGirl357 [2011-08-27 01:05:38 +0000 UTC]

LOL I love this! I was freaking out at the beginning, but I love how it turns out!

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julia0213 In reply to EragonJediGirl357 [2011-08-27 02:09:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!! and yay, that was the reaction i was going for

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vedisdragon [2011-07-07 23:29:52 +0000 UTC]

ty love it lolz! somehow murtagh almost always gets the upper hand

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-07-08 01:22:33 +0000 UTC]

hah, yeah, i know, right?
thanks!!

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-08 13:47:59 +0000 UTC]


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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-07-08 19:39:18 +0000 UTC]


thanks for the fav and watch

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-09 16:23:02 +0000 UTC]

np! anytime!

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-07-09 18:39:50 +0000 UTC]

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-10 18:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Vo_oV

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-07-10 18:44:36 +0000 UTC]

^o.o^

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-10 21:55:43 +0000 UTC]

lolz murtagh 4evah!!!!

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-07-10 22:03:42 +0000 UTC]

yups i hope Eragon doesn't kill him O_o

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-10 22:08:09 +0000 UTC]

oh my fucking god if there was a twist and MURTAGH WAS KILLED I WOULD SUE THEN KILL THE AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HES 2 HOT 2 BE KILLED!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-07-10 22:13:22 +0000 UTC]

i know, right? i like Murtagh

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-11 14:02:01 +0000 UTC]

IM OBESESSED WITH HIM HE WWOULD BE MY TOTAL IDOL IF HE ACUALLY EXCISTED

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-07-11 19:50:29 +0000 UTC]

If he existed, I think I'd die of pure excitement

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-12 00:53:53 +0000 UTC]

I no rite god hells yea he's hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-07-12 04:55:08 +0000 UTC]

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-30 01:18:27 +0000 UTC]

omfg i just drew a pic of him...its kinda personal so im not gonna post it...i think im gonna die now...

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-08-01 03:58:40 +0000 UTC]

oh, dear nosebleed worthy?

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vedisdragon In reply to julia0213 [2011-08-16 03:48:04 +0000 UTC]

yesh....

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julia0213 In reply to vedisdragon [2011-08-16 04:26:31 +0000 UTC]

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andrew3048 [2011-07-07 17:23:00 +0000 UTC]

Great job glad I have time to read it on the computer now

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julia0213 In reply to andrew3048 [2011-07-07 18:32:32 +0000 UTC]

hehehe thanks for proofreading

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andrew3048 In reply to julia0213 [2011-07-10 04:14:52 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!!!

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Emma-elda [2011-07-07 16:01:10 +0000 UTC]

oh its awesome

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julia0213 In reply to Emma-elda [2011-07-07 18:32:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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