flyinglady [2003-06-28 19:35:57 +0000 UTC]

instant fav., i love it, the last line is what gets me

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awestruck-clay [2003-06-28 09:18:40 +0000 UTC]

great stuff. well developed. it took me there. a timeline.
a peculiar assorment of words. very enjoyable. thank you.

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cataplasia [2003-06-25 00:58:15 +0000 UTC]

The beauty of your work always overloads me with surreal images, it's so rewarding. This is the type of stuff i love reading again and again. Yowziers, we have winner.

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evad [2003-06-24 15:04:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm also in support of this poem. But it makes me feel young(er than you).

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colen [2003-06-24 14:06:14 +0000 UTC]

it seems like i was drunk and was running thru a beautiful feild or what i thought was a beautiful feild and blanked out and went to rehab and went thru all these diff memories of what i used to do and stayed there.

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prettyinpiink [2003-06-24 01:09:03 +0000 UTC]

wow, see this was cool because i sort of caught your drift on what you were saying more... taking into consideration all the stuff you have told me about your writing, jumbling of words, etc. i thought it was very clever of you to have all of the different ages and the things that were done at that time. some crazy personification and so on in there... i could never write like that... you've got a real gift.
-sara

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