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Published: 2011-05-13 13:07:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1819; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 19
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She's my character for one group at VKontakte. Her name is MoKo ( or MyQwe - full name is My Qween) She has a psychological desease - superiority complex.Related content
Comments: 56
Nice job with the clean lineart: the line weights are well-chosen and complement the picture.
Your fabric folds, posing, and hands are SO fantastic, but my one critique is that her head seems a bit big.
Wait, that's totally a pun. Big head? Overinflated ego? Feelings of superiority? ;D
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Thank you for your opinion. )
Head is my big problem.. I will more practice.
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Cool. ^_^
I would just suggest one thing...her left leg (or on the side we see it, it's to the right) looks a little bit too straight, and makes her look like she's sitting high up while her legs dangle farther down...maybe make the leg a bit more horizontal?
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Niiiice sketch! I really get the whole comfort zone of her room and such and it's just. . . Well, brilliant!
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Coolie~!!! I love her expression~! AND AGAIN WITH THOSE HANDS! ASDFGHJK---LOVE!
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That's some pretty good line art, but I think that some shading might improve it. It'll bring out some texture you know? And it'll look more appealing. Then again I don't know if you have colored version so yeah XD Her position looks a little awkward in my opinion too. Mostly her legs, they don't look like they are actually resting on the bed all that much. This is an example of where the shading might help some. Overall I really like it. Keep up the good work 
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Thank you for your opinion )
I'm glad you like it )
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Love the detail in this picture, your lineart is awesome!
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Nice job with this, you did a good job with the perspective although it was slightly off, but still really good. Nice character design, she sounds like she has a cool personality XD The room design is simple but interesting, also helping to relate aspects of the characters personality to the viewer, great job!
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Thank you
I'm glad you like it)
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Great work!
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Your lines are wonderfully crisp and varied! This is some great line work!
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