Comments: 17
CaptainSeby [2009-07-06 22:57:15 +0000 UTC]
I guess I bring that film up a lot but--This reminds me so much of Eraserhead it's insane. Sounds like it could be Mary's inner monologue.
Of course whenever I associate something with Eraserhead it means I find it genius. So yeah. I love it.
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kaenakasia In reply to CaptainSeby [2009-07-06 23:21:06 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thank you. I need to watch that... from what I've heard, it sounds pretty amazing.
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CaptainSeby In reply to kaenakasia [2009-07-06 23:47:35 +0000 UTC]
for my money, the finest film ever made.
very unsettling at first watch though.
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kaenakasia In reply to CaptainSeby [2009-07-06 23:50:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm okay with unsettling. Some of my favorite movies are The Wall and Clockwork Orange.
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kaenakasia In reply to CaptainSeby [2009-08-05 02:30:05 +0000 UTC]
Saw Eraserhead... how delightfully disturbing!
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SaerubinJew [2008-11-22 20:50:06 +0000 UTC]
dude this is so much like stephen king (i should know) its scary and its amazing wow and scary
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Skipper369 [2008-11-15 21:03:38 +0000 UTC]
You scare me sometimes. Which I guess is a good thing, as this is a piece of horror.
I like flash fiction, and this is really well done, with mood and mystery and a baby that won't shut up. And I agree with Roxy--the punctuation (and lack of) is perfect.
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Lunatic-roxy [2008-11-15 20:38:37 +0000 UTC]
however I think it would be more effective if you didn't swear so much. It's realistic, but it takes away from the quality. just an opinion.
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Lunatic-roxy [2008-11-15 20:32:24 +0000 UTC]
wow. I really like how it reads, no punctuation so you go so fast it's like running down a hill, then short little stoppers. really jerks you around.
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Lunatic-roxy In reply to kaenakasia [2008-11-22 17:28:27 +0000 UTC]
it is an awesome piece, though. mildly nightmarish, but in a good way.
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