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Published: 2008-11-15 20:11:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 148; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Stupid baby won't shut up.
Where am I? Why am I here? Madmanmadmanmadman. I am Lunatic. Insane. *Laughs* I am Crazy. Let's play a game...
Goddamn baby won't shut the fuck up.
Shattering consciousness, we are the undead. Living, breathing, ever talking, but no one's thinking anymore, no one's loving. Escape... how do I escape this reality? Slipping... they said I was slipping and now I have fallen. I tripped or I stepped over the edge. Holding on? Not anymore... no going back, we can't climb back over, we have forsaken that chance, lost every shred of... what? Sanity? Don't make me laugh...
Stop crying, you stupid piece of shit!
Lost it lost it lost it mummy was right should have stayed home went to school got a job become a tool anything's better than this sea of green I've slipped into run away while you still have a chance... No chance. Nothing. We are left with nothing, no people trying to coax us back any more, not after I pushed the little bitch farther than even I've gone... Fear pours from their every orifice, I can smell it in their sweat in their veiled looks in their unintelligible words...
I swear I'll kill the little shit make it stop crying or I'll kill it I swear.
The mirror broke, seven years trapped in my head, can it get any worse than this? Don't give me your bad luck bullshit, you haven't seen anything until you've seen the divide, until you've known the great separation you've seen nothing. Splintering this, this my mind, my life, my death. Someone went in with a knife and sliced me up handed me out and whatever was returned I got back but nothing was returned so I'm stuck I'm lost I have nothing I am rampant I am...
That's it. I'm going to kill the little fuck.
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Comments: 17

CaptainSeby [2009-07-06 22:57:15 +0000 UTC]

I guess I bring that film up a lot but--This reminds me so much of Eraserhead it's insane. Sounds like it could be Mary's inner monologue.

Of course whenever I associate something with Eraserhead it means I find it genius. So yeah. I love it.

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kaenakasia In reply to CaptainSeby [2009-07-06 23:21:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you. I need to watch that... from what I've heard, it sounds pretty amazing.

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CaptainSeby In reply to kaenakasia [2009-07-06 23:47:35 +0000 UTC]

for my money, the finest film ever made.

very unsettling at first watch though.

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kaenakasia In reply to CaptainSeby [2009-07-06 23:50:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm okay with unsettling. Some of my favorite movies are The Wall and Clockwork Orange.

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CaptainSeby In reply to kaenakasia [2009-07-07 00:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Then see Eraserhead asap.

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kaenakasia In reply to CaptainSeby [2009-08-05 02:30:05 +0000 UTC]

Saw Eraserhead... how delightfully disturbing!

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CaptainSeby In reply to kaenakasia [2009-08-05 11:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Amazing no?

With every subsequent viewing it becomes less and less disturbing and more and more beautiful

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kaenakasia In reply to CaptainSeby [2009-08-05 15:27:02 +0000 UTC]

hehe ^^

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kaenakasia In reply to CaptainSeby [2009-07-07 16:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Will do, rest assured.

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SaerubinJew [2008-11-22 20:50:06 +0000 UTC]

dude this is so much like stephen king (i should know) its scary and its amazing wow and scary

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Skipper369 [2008-11-15 21:03:38 +0000 UTC]

You scare me sometimes. Which I guess is a good thing, as this is a piece of horror.
I like flash fiction, and this is really well done, with mood and mystery and a baby that won't shut up. And I agree with Roxy--the punctuation (and lack of) is perfect.

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kaenakasia In reply to Skipper369 [2008-11-17 01:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks.

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Lunatic-roxy [2008-11-15 20:38:37 +0000 UTC]

however I think it would be more effective if you didn't swear so much. It's realistic, but it takes away from the quality. just an opinion.

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kaenakasia In reply to Lunatic-roxy [2008-11-17 04:25:26 +0000 UTC]

I'll keep that in mind!

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Lunatic-roxy [2008-11-15 20:32:24 +0000 UTC]

wow. I really like how it reads, no punctuation so you go so fast it's like running down a hill, then short little stoppers. really jerks you around.

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kaenakasia In reply to Lunatic-roxy [2008-11-17 04:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Lunatic-roxy In reply to kaenakasia [2008-11-22 17:28:27 +0000 UTC]

it is an awesome piece, though. mildly nightmarish, but in a good way.

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