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KageLu — War of the Spiderqueen 16
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Published: 2010-06-15 14:57:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1940; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 48
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Page 16 is up and we have come to the last page of chapter 1~!
Edge commented that unlike the prior pages, this one is more action less talk.
First time I attempted a spider demon, hope you all like it.
New problem- unsure about what part of the story should be done next. The story isn't really written in a neat little timeline and alot is happening in the same time frame.
So I'm not sure if I should continue to chapter 2 or skip it and go to the next chapter containing Pharaun and Rylds.
Feedback would be appreciated
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Pharaun = PWNS!!!! LOL. Pharaun: ''This is interesting'' Ryld: *facepalm* XD
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Wow. This is a great comics. I actually read first book of our series. This is a great story
Pharaun and Ryld are my favourite characters in book.
(sorry for my language, I am from Polish, and didn't learn English very much... :/)
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I don't really remember what exactly happened in chapter 2 (it's been a while since I read the book) but I'd love to see those chappies where Pharaun and Ryld scouted the city and met all sorts of weirdos.
Keep up the good work, yup
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Chapter 2 is basically bad spider demon gets beaten up and grind under heel of big bad naked drow mistress of academy
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oh, yeah, I remember now. Wasn't it slightly boring though, especially in comparison to Pharaun and Ryld's carousing?
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I know, I forgot it completely
till started
rereading the book for the doujin. Yeah, the scenes with the two guys fooling about town are the best!
Will of course draw those!
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I think you should skip Pharaun/Greyanna storyline (it's only in first book, right
The Gromph's fight with Lord Dyrr was just pure awesomeness^^
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