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King-Lyger [2009-10-31 07:28:08 +0000 UTC]
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Remember me? I'm the one who critiqued your other drawing with Shadow in it.
Anyways, onto this one. When I saw the background, I immediately imagined Shadow and this other hedgehog chatting while looking out the windows into space. The small stars were a nice touch to add a sense of place to the drawing. This could just be me, too, but the black ceiling also helps with that.
The only two things that leap out at me as "wrong" are Shadow's left arm (it's a little too long) and the girl's left hand. In the latter case, the shading doesn't look quite right, and it doesn't look quite like a palm. Looks a little flat.
Your work with hands is definitely getting better, though! You'll recall that in the "King Shadow" drawing you did, I said the shape of the hands was a problem. Here, it isn't an issue; it's just the shading in one of them.
The rest of the shading and the coloring is all done very well, and the mixes of purples in the background add a darker tone to it. This one gets an "A" grade.
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KaiThePhaux In reply to King-Lyger [2009-10-31 19:40:51 +0000 UTC]
I remember ya!
I always love your critiques. :3
I really agree about the stars and the ceiling, that's the look I was going for - Possibly a natural lighting only, like from the Earth, moon, or sun's lighting. Not too much inner-light going on (possibly from the lack of use in the ARK or something).
I agree about Shadow's left arm - I accidentally drew the hand before the arm, and then swore for like...20 minutes because I didn't place it right - xD
I also agree about the shading on Sugar's palm. It does seem a little flat. I'll have to work on that one in the future.
Thanks for you rockin' critique!
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BlackiDevianArt [2014-10-27 05:55:01 +0000 UTC]
unless you just drew over another character nice job
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LunaArtStudios [2013-12-01 12:24:37 +0000 UTC]
This is cool, like something straight out of the comics. How do you do it? Β
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KaiThePhaux In reply to LunaArtStudios [2013-12-01 23:33:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Β With pencils, pens, and Photoshop for color, haha.
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Sir-Duke01 [2013-10-07 21:16:03 +0000 UTC]
cool
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ihmps6p07 [2013-09-20 14:31:04 +0000 UTC]
Err....It quite perfect....good job!
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animedisneyluver809 [2013-08-06 00:14:45 +0000 UTC]
Looks like a genuine comic panel! Very good!
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fallenjman98 [2013-07-05 21:47:45 +0000 UTC]
reminds me of hot becky
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Corleone2000 [2013-04-06 07:37:20 +0000 UTC]
Does anyone know where Sugar actually appears? I mean in a movie or something??
By the way, great pic
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Everonee In reply to Corleone2000 [2013-12-27 19:45:01 +0000 UTC]
Sugar doesn't appear at all; she's just a really popular fan character.
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Princessoftomatoes [2013-03-29 04:53:31 +0000 UTC]
I literally thought this was something out of the Archie Sonic comic when I first saw this picture. Great job!
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yoyojeep [2012-12-03 21:02:07 +0000 UTC]
Is Sugar a real character or a really popular fc
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jadedacatl106 [2012-10-06 03:42:18 +0000 UTC]
it looks like it EXACTLY like the comic
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Pie11644 [2012-09-29 00:09:21 +0000 UTC]
Looks like a scene in sonic universe
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VeeandSugARK13 [2012-06-17 21:16:44 +0000 UTC]
so who was the original creator of sugar????
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Tabby1179 [2012-04-15 00:17:41 +0000 UTC]
This is really good!
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SunnyD5 [2012-03-12 07:48:34 +0000 UTC]
This reminds me of Shadow's comic style...I love this pic and the fancharacter looks real nice too.
and...sorry to sound dumb, but what's and art trade and how do you do them? lol, I'm new.
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Acruxic [2012-03-06 03:28:18 +0000 UTC]
Idk why but this looks like something from sonic universe comic lol
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amyrosegirl01 [2012-01-07 22:30:31 +0000 UTC]
A COMIC
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Toskato [2011-08-09 23:34:33 +0000 UTC]
is sugar the hedgehog real?
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Toskato In reply to dragon0693 [2011-11-05 13:22:12 +0000 UTC]
when i clicked on the link it said it didnt exist...
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Toskato In reply to dragon0693 [2011-11-05 13:30:47 +0000 UTC]
oh. so she is fake.
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dragon0693 In reply to Toskato [2011-11-05 13:34:23 +0000 UTC]
She can only be seen with Shadow in many artworks and deviations
by The creator
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naviathewolf [2011-06-17 06:58:38 +0000 UTC]
yo yo yo...it's sika! i havn't been on hear for like ever..wat up oh...and your drawnings amazing like always
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KaiThePhaux In reply to naviathewolf [2011-06-17 19:29:27 +0000 UTC]
;-; Omg - It's so crazy to see you online!!!! <3
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naviathewolf In reply to KaiThePhaux [2012-04-07 04:31:22 +0000 UTC]
well im back again im going to try to put some art up i did on paint dont judge
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Greenhood-Station [2011-03-29 11:43:39 +0000 UTC]
Sugar and Shadow from archie comics Good job!
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LindoSonido [2011-03-05 00:57:12 +0000 UTC]
wow how did you do that??
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KaiThePhaux In reply to LindoSonido [2011-06-17 19:29:46 +0000 UTC]
Pencil, paper, and a little Photoshop! xD
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meerkatgirl101 [2010-12-23 22:24:25 +0000 UTC]
it looks like it was from archie. nice job!
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megaboy50 [2010-08-28 03:35:23 +0000 UTC]
I get MASSIVE archie comic vibes from this artwork..were you inspired by the sonic the hedgehog comic?
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KaiThePhaux In reply to jasperoura [2010-07-27 04:26:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
You are? His coloring style's simply crazy-good! I'll have to go through your gallery to see what you have so far. =3
I believe they're supposed to be in a relationship. Dating and such. ^^'
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jasperoura In reply to KaiThePhaux [2010-07-27 04:28:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I didn't make anything yet. ^^' I drew a picture earlier in an attempt at 's style, though! :3
Ohhh! More of that, huh? xD
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Mmariapink [2010-07-14 12:14:46 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful!!!! ^^
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NinjaHaku21 [2010-06-27 01:03:02 +0000 UTC]
Okay, seriously! You're art so reminds me of ! If you heard this before, then that's because it's true!!!! Keep it up!! BIG time!!
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KaiThePhaux In reply to NinjaHaku21 [2010-06-27 01:42:58 +0000 UTC]
xD I hear this every day, literally. Thanks so much!
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