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Description Yet another piece for - this time the issue was "what if Lien won". While making it, I even came up with a bit of story behind it.
- No talking, barbaric beast! - Lien snarled - You are not allowed to speak in my presence.
There was a loud clang and Temeraire hissed angrily, yet said nothing. Lawrence didn't need to turn around to know what happened. Like many times before, Lien put her rear paw on black dragon's snout and pushed him away from his captain till the chain that held the captured Celestial in place got tight. Oh, that chain! Like all other parts of the humiliating bondage, it was made of the parts of the harness, Temeraire used to wear into battle. Lien decided that if he enjoyed it that much before, he should enjoy it in this form as well.
The idea of no speaking was also hers. Lawrence didn't know, where did she learn such ways of treating prisoners, but he was pretty sure it was not when she accompanied Napoleon during his conquests. At that time Lawrence thought that the worst thing she may do is killing Temeraire or him and leaving the other one to his grief. Now he almost hoped something like that happened. He could barely look at the once mighty and proud dragon - his wings tied close to his body, his crest lying flat on his neck. And his beautiful, solid black scales lost their shine, covered in dust and mud. How awful it must be for a creature that cared for the hygiene more than many people!
They could not speak, but at least they could see each other, though that was not making things better. Granby and Iskierka were in worse state, couldn't even catch a glimpse of one another. Yet poor Granby could be sure of his dragon's presence because of clouds of smoke she was continuously sending up through the wooden platform, making him cough. Beneath them Iskierka was literally boiling with anger, producing insane amounts of steam. To irritate her even more, Lien let her paw hang down almost directly above Kazilik's head. In the beginning of their imprisonment the red dragoness managed to break her bonds and almost bit the dangling limb. After that Lawrence and two dragons were forced to look at Granby getting beating and were warned that any further disobedience will be punished as well. Even Iskierka didn't dare to try if the threat was real.
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Kalia24 In reply to ??? [2019-12-20 17:54:38 +0000 UTC]

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KaptainJay In reply to Kalia24 [2019-12-26 07:37:39 +0000 UTC]

True, but I still hope so for this reality. Its silly but its just me. 

Now that I think of it, please don't take this as negative criticism of your work.

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Kalia24 In reply to KaptainJay [2020-01-02 11:20:59 +0000 UTC]

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Lajla0 [2018-02-28 22:59:27 +0000 UTC]

LIEN OMG <33333333333 zakochana

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RandomVanGloboii [2016-11-01 23:02:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the nightmares
*covers himself in bed hugging his copy of Throne of Jade*

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Kalia24 In reply to RandomVanGloboii [2016-11-02 19:13:34 +0000 UTC]

Yyyy... u're welcome? xD

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Bazil3282 [2015-07-23 09:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Obrazek fajny, ale poważnie wątpię, aby to faktycznie miało tak wyglądać.

Po pierwsze, to w ogóle nie w stylu Lien. Mimo wszystko sprawia wrażenie postaci zbyt wyrafinowanej, aby po zwycięstwie zdecydowała się upokorzyć swoich wrogów w tak prostacki sposób. Zresztą, całkiem nie o tym mówiła, kiedy w "Wojnie prochowej" groziła Temeraire'owi. Wyraźnie zapowiedziała, że pozwoli mu normalnie żyć, już po tym, jak odbierze mu wszystko, na czym mu zależy - niepotrzebne pęta, żeby w takiej sytuacji cierpiał.

Po drugie, co tu robi Iskierka? Przecież Lien nie ma do niej absolutnie nic - obchodzi ją tyle, co każdy szeregowy smok walczący po stronie Brytyjczyków. Nie ma żadnego powodu, dla którego miałaby walkę przeciwko niej traktować personalnie, jako osobistą wendettę, ani też mścić się na niej w ten czy inny sposób. W tej jednej scenie, kiedy się spotkały, Lien bardziej interesowały próby przeciągnięcia Iskierki na stronę Francuzów.

Nie pasuje mi też ten uśmieszek Lien. Za każdym razem, gdy się pojawia, jest bardzo poważna i powściągliwa - jakoś nie umiem jej sobie wyobrazić, szczerzącej się w ten sposób. No i gdzie się podziały jej klejnoty?

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Kalia24 In reply to Bazil3282 [2015-07-23 13:28:14 +0000 UTC]

Ok, może zacznę od początku, czyli jak brzmiało zamówienie na ten obrazek: miała być ofc Lien i usługujący jej (w możliwie poniżający sposób) Lawrence i Granby, a w tle miały być Iskierka i Temeraire jakoś uwięzione/spętane. Przekręciłam trochę wymogi, bo ustawianie smoków w dalekim tle byłoby wg. mnie stratą dla obrazka, a poza tym od razu miałam pomysł na wykorzystanie zdolności parogennych Iskierki.
Mam nadzieję, że powyższe przynajmniej z grubsza wyjaśnia obecność Iskierki, Granby'ego oraz pęt. Co do tych ostatnich, to ich wykorzystanie nie powinno aż tak bardzo dziwić, jeśli przypomnisz sobie, co spotkało Arkady'ego bodajże w Krwi tyranów. Akurat tutaj darowałam sobie łańcuch spinający skrzydła, bo jednak ze względu na pochodzenie Temer miał traktowanie ulgowe - poza tym pęta z uprzęży są dostatecznie upokarzające.
Co do "uśmieszku" - chciałam jej nadać jakiś wyraz pyska: coś pomiędzy warknięciem, sykiem a wypowiedzią pod adresem Temeraire'a. Wyszło jak widać, a wygląda na uśmiech tylko dlatego, że w moim designie Niebiańskie/Cesarskie mają podwiniętą końcówkę pyska.
A jeśli chodzi o klejnoty - nikomu, nawet smokowi, nie polecam udawać się do sauny w biżuterii.

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Bazil3282 In reply to Kalia24 [2015-07-23 15:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Ale wiesz - Arkady w Krwi Tyranów został tak potraktowany nie bez powodu. Nie wynika to tylko z faktu, że w odróżnieniu od Temeraire'a nie jest wysokiego urodzenia - został tak potraktowany, aby dawni stronnicy Yongxinga mogli w spokoju wcisnąć wszystkim swoją bajeczkę o przemytnikach opium, a potem ewentualnie wykorzystać Arkadego jako kozła ofiarnego. Poza tym, skoro nie chcieli, żeby im gdzieś uciekł, nie ma nic dziwnego w tym, że okaleczyli mu skrzydła.
Nie ma to porównania ze stosunkami Temeraire - Lien. Ta druga, jak już mówiłem, miała wobec tego pierwszego dużo bardziej pokrętne plany, a poza tym nie zapominajmy jeszcze i o tym, że tak naprawdę zawdzięcza Temeraire'owi życie (przecież to on dostarczył Francuzom lek na trawiący ją chorobę - od której na pewno by umarła). Oraz o tym, że Napoleon ma dług wobec Temeraire'a i Lawrence'a, a Lien przecież liczy się z jego zdaniem.

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verylittle-sis [2015-02-16 10:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow...that's how I feel in school

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Kalia24 In reply to verylittle-sis [2015-02-16 12:49:42 +0000 UTC]

It can't be THAT bad

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verylittle-sis In reply to Kalia24 [2015-02-16 15:32:57 +0000 UTC]

who knows...o.O

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TastyRainbow-Boy [2014-10-28 22:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Interesting Concept, but that will never happen...O-O

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Kalia24 In reply to TastyRainbow-Boy [2014-10-29 11:44:55 +0000 UTC]

I hope so... As far as I pity Lien, I woudn't like her to hurt Temer and his friends.

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TastyRainbow-Boy In reply to Kalia24 [2014-10-29 19:02:39 +0000 UTC]

I agree ^^  and Iskierkas Revenge will be cruel xD.

And yes...She was wise and kind..somehow/day. But after the Accident with her Prince she become angry and jaundiced. And as a Servent for Bonparte in the War will not make feel her better. She and Temeraire could so many great things for Dragonkind and the Men....

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Kooskia [2014-10-16 22:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Why i missed this one? XD Gosh it's awesome xD

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Kalia24 In reply to Kooskia [2014-10-17 06:03:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, maybe it sneaked past u
Thanks

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Sennish [2014-10-12 08:32:55 +0000 UTC]

Nicee **

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Kalia24 In reply to Sennish [2014-10-12 17:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Keyotea [2014-09-27 22:56:53 +0000 UTC]

White stands for misfortune and death in the east.

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Kalia24 In reply to Keyotea [2014-09-28 06:49:47 +0000 UTC]

Yup, and that's why Lien was barely tolerated when she lived in China (she was an albino of the same specie as the black one) - only because of her royal origins in fact. That made her bitter and hateful (as u can see above).

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Dark-Dragon-13 [2014-09-26 19:09:23 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work, Lots of detail
Are those European dragons or Western dragons?

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Kalia24 In reply to Dark-Dragon-13 [2014-09-27 07:15:09 +0000 UTC]

All of them are Asian.
The red one is Turkish, so you may say she's about-Western. The black and white ones are Chinese/Japanese. Yet in the books they are appearing in there's no magic, so dragons need wings to fly. So they are winged Eastern.

If u like dragons, I strongly recommend the series "Temeraire" to u

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Dark-Dragon-13 In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-29 15:12:46 +0000 UTC]

Awesome dragons!
n Thank you very much, ill check that out. I <3 Dragons!

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notecardPasta [2014-09-26 11:34:39 +0000 UTC]

This is very interesting! Lovely work!

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Kalia24 In reply to notecardPasta [2014-09-27 07:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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KuroKato [2014-09-26 08:31:48 +0000 UTC]

lien's dream ... 

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Kalia24 In reply to KuroKato [2014-09-27 07:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess so - but still there's one more book, so everything can change (not THAT much though, I think).

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Vapolord [2014-09-23 20:47:40 +0000 UTC]

I wonder how this series is gonna end. Read all books so far, I really liked it, but somhow I always felt that this journey leads nowhere. Its like yea Napoleon is the "bad one" but he isn't really that "bad". Somehow I would have liked if she would have spinned "further off" the original Napoleonic wars. At the end of the day they are lovable characters, yet I somehow find temeraire to "political correct" most times. Whatever ..... Interesting Illustration btw. Iskierka has no fun without cash hahah

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Kalia24 In reply to Vapolord [2014-09-24 06:15:46 +0000 UTC]

There's a fanfic story (book-released this month) going on after books' events, though it's only in Polish.

And I somehow have same feelings too - can't see any other outcome than: "everyone dies" or "villains go to jail, heroes go free". Though I like the books, I'm happy the next one is the last - sometimes I think the author is running low on GOOD ideas for things to happen.

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Vapolord In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-24 17:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Thats true. Somehow its like "so I wanna write 9 books.... " but then realizing "daym, how shall I fill them. Hah I know! Trips around the whole world. That will do!".Btw do you know if the 9th book came out already? Even if I gonna wait until its translated into german. Even though I understand english perfectly, it just feels wrong to have a whole series with only the last book in a different language. One of the Problems I also have with this series, that it has only like "entertainment"- value. Its not really something that you can learn stuff from for real life. Ofc there are some moments, but overall I would have wished it to have more "value" for real life. Somehow most dragon related books these days are only about the "good guys" and the "bad guys" and a super dude gets teached by a old master and they slay all the bad ones. This is just boring if you ask me. Iam searching for more interesting takes on the topic. It will also be interesting, when peter Jackson starts to make the movies for temeraires books. It could become very nice, but yet I think that the movies won't have like "soul". Am I the only one, that thinks that "the hobbit" somehow has not as much "soul" as LOTR? Its like he has never left his studio and filmed everything at the front of a greenscreen.

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Bazil3282 In reply to Vapolord [2015-07-23 09:59:51 +0000 UTC]

Somehow most dragon related books these days are only about the "good guys" and the "bad guys"

OK, what exactly makes the characters in "Temeraire" series either good or bad guys? The mere fact that they fight with or against our heroes? Which is - you know - thing that every soldier does during a war? And characters like Tom Riley or Lord Allendale - are they good, or bad?
There is no "good & bad" distinction in those books, especially due to the fact that they merely portray a war that actually happened in real history - it is just altered by the presence of dragons. Nothing more. And the battling nations are just as "good" or "bad" as the real-world nations, fighting in Napoleonic wars.

You are wrong about entertainment-only value as well. Those books show the world of that era in rather detailed way and you do can learn, how people lived and fought the wars in early XIX century. And if you do know history, the books are still quite decent intellectual fun, when you compare this alternate world to the real one, and see for example quite credible changes in the world's balance of power, that the dragons cause.

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Vapolord In reply to Bazil3282 [2015-07-23 12:47:21 +0000 UTC]

I do like the Temeraire series, don't get me wrong there! The good guys vs bad guys thingy was just about dragon books in general.

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Bazil3282 In reply to Vapolord [2015-07-23 15:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, I thought otherwise. Why would you even mention this thingy when talking about Temeraire series?

And I know you like that series (I read it...), but liking the series doesn't mean "loving it unquestioningly".

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Vapolord In reply to Bazil3282 [2015-07-23 15:24:13 +0000 UTC]

My comment was from september 2014. It has been almost 10 monts since then. No clue why I mentonied it back then.

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Kalia24 In reply to Vapolord [2014-09-25 07:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Nope, 9'th book is not out yet - I bet when they announce it' there will be an info in
And fantasy books are... well - fantasy. I haven't seen much releases in this category that have any educational value (other than the one u have to conclude yourself from the actions and thoughts of the characters). For me it's not any negative, since that's what I'm looking for in books - entertainment and breeding ground for my imagination.

As for the movie - after LotR I was very happy that Jackson may do the filming (even now, after 13 years these films are epic). Now, after 2/3 of Hobbit, I don't want him to touch these books and make them into scripts. Human-like dwarves? Romance between an elf and a dwarf? ********** Sorry, but NO. I don't want Lawrence to end up romancing with Emily (though many ppl around would love it - even though it would be a pedophilia or relationship with a more-than-20-years-younger girl, which in real world is looked at bad) or get the history changed in some other ways. And problem with Hobbit itself is more like: "I'll make an epic movie out of children bookstory, but still keep it childish". That just couldn't work fine - putting together sense of danger (like Azog the White, awaking Sauron and Smaug) with silly, clumsy galoots (dwarves, goblins etc.). The film just killed itself with those two contrasting aspects - it's neither thrilling (like LotR) nor funny (like original bookstory).

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Vapolord In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-25 17:18:09 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, I fear for these kind of "changes" Peter Jackson does. This love relationship between the dwarf and the elf is just akward. And even doh the Hobbit has "ages" of playtime yet it is somehow rushed at the wrong areas. I don't know somehow some parts are way to long and other too short. For example the one where they go down the river in these barrels. This takes like.... and eternety. But iam glad Smaug got quite some screentime at least^^.

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Kalia24 In reply to Vapolord [2014-09-26 06:25:54 +0000 UTC]

The barrel ride was the part "look, we have special effects; oh, look - we have more special effects; oh, and there's Legolas, don't forget". Still I prefer this one to the part about Bard, who got demoted from leader of Dale's ppl to some ferryman.

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Vapolord In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-27 12:45:06 +0000 UTC]

True. I wonder what he does with the Temeraire series. Could be "interesting".

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GoogyNoober-2017 In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-24 08:20:36 +0000 UTC]

"There's a fanfic story (book-released this month) going on after books' events"

Could you give me the link. I read Italian and German post-books' fanfics [using google translator]. Both were based on the real history. In the German one all villains and heroes were survived but their lives abruptly changed.

Actually there were many important and tragic events between Napoleon's defeat and the Russian company, so each of this events can be a subplot or a plot twist. It all depends of the author. For example: Napoleon had a plan to run to America but the British betrayed him so instead of America he went to the small and cold island.  

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Kalia24 In reply to GoogyNoober-2017 [2014-09-24 13:46:08 +0000 UTC]

It's only in paper form, so no links to share, sorry...

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GoogyNoober-2017 In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-24 15:33:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh Maybe scan-copies? Just kidding

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GoogyNoober-2017 [2014-09-23 08:27:39 +0000 UTC]

I really like how she puts her paw on Temeraire's nose. It reminds to me my cats. They always start their fights with a paw on someone's nose. BTW the British underpants looks cute and funny.

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KeizerHarm [2014-09-22 21:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, their looks are all genius! I would have expected Lien covered in jewels from her conquests, but perhaps not while taking a steam bath. But Laurence and Granby wearing Union Jack underwear, Laurence polishing Lien's nails, pure brilliance! I find myself desperately studying the picture, looking for ways they can escape

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Kalia24 In reply to KeizerHarm [2014-09-22 21:12:18 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I considered jewellery too (especially Temer's breasplate), but then I thought that wearing anything in steam bath - especially metal-made - may be not a good idea, even if u're a dragon.
Well, if u find any way, let them know - I feel somehow guilty about putting them there...

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KeizerHarm In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-22 21:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Maybe if Temeraire says something nasty about Yongxing, then Lien will push his head extra hard, and if Temeraire pulls the chain at the same time it could break, and Laurence could jump on him and he would run away. Probably to later get captured, but maybe Laurence can get his muzzle off and he can roar down some of Lien's pavilions before they get him Or Tharkay would show up at the right time and save the day

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Kalia24 In reply to KeizerHarm [2014-09-23 06:57:22 +0000 UTC]

I'd rather count for Tharkay xD

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KeizerHarm In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-23 08:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Why not both?

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Kalia24 In reply to KeizerHarm [2014-09-23 16:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Because I think that Temer is too much afraid of losing Lawrence to say/do anything - and they can't speak to each other to arrange some plan together.

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KeizerHarm In reply to Kalia24 [2014-09-23 16:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Initially I would agree with you, but when you are tied up like that and tortured your mind starts wondering off, and desperate needs lead to desperate deeds.

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