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Zeldalina [2009-06-19 05:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Not bad, although you could've added some more shading to the bottom of the earrings, as well as make the teeth whiter, and next time, make her eyes a lot smaller, as big eyes are an anime style trait, and you should next time make the nose a bit bigger as well as the lips,and I also suggest you add a little more shading and highlights on her crown and jewels, and some more shading to distinguish the difference between her bangs and flowing ponytail. You should also add some purple to the darker areas of skin and blend it to create a more realistic outcome, instead of just using browns and such. I like how the eyes have turned out, although I'd suggest some more shading in them to bring them out a little more. It's good to see that someone can do something like this on a computer, as I cannot, but I can traditionally with pencil, ink, and colored pencils. It's good for a start, and I really hope you don't take me in the wrong way, seeing as I might be younger than you, but I've been studying realism more and more, and observing people in real life can really help with all of these aspects. Sorry for a super long comment, but I felt that you should have a little bit of critique to help you a bit with the next one that you draw. I also think you should submit more to your DA Gallery.

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wiggler94 [2009-06-13 09:53:52 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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