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kamidoodles — Commish - otp: bard and sorceress
Published: 2014-01-09 01:37:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2363; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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Finished 4x6 flats commission for commanderbishoujo @ tumblr.Related content
Comments: 13
I recognized Giselle right away. Very nicely done.
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The warden's pose is excellent (I realise it's probably the BioUnderWear but it's nice seeing a woman with a short, hourglass-y waist for a change lol!) and the expressions are very well done within the style. Leli's pose is confusing me a little. I'm not sure if I am seeing, uh, one boob or two and the placement of the ribbon doesn't help. It looks like Leli's shoulders are flat on the surface, but everything from her collarbones down is rotated slightly towards the viewer. (Note: I wouldn't be giving detailed critique if I didn't think it/you were really good...)
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I appreciate the sentiment but I didn't ask for a critique. (:
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no? what gives you that impression?
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Or do you mean the stomach itself? If so I don't know what to tell you. The stomach is flat, it's just pressed in where her arm is resting.
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Like I said to the other person, it's just a place to put a hand.
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I think it was the way the lady on top was touching her lover's tummy
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It's just a place to put a hand (:
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