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karribou — Rain That Rattles On Stones
Published: 2011-10-18 00:00:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 401; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 3
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This is a character that I (hopefully) claimed from warrior cats claim. Her name is Rain that Rattles on Stones... It's from Warriors. I was trying to get the proportions right... if you have anything to suggest, please do so!Related content
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So I saw what the other person's critique was, and I have a few things to add. (You can use the same references)
First off, the head's a bit small. A general rule (not always exact, it varies for some cats) is the body's about three heads long. Another thing is, you have the arch of the back and the stomach curving down, whereas for cats it's always curving up (see pictures) The joints are also very rounded and smooth on most cats. Lastly, the tail could be a bit thicker and longer.
This is a great pic. ^^ Hope this helps.
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Thanks! Yeah looking at this now I cringe!
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Haha I know how that feels. XD I look back at some of my old works (mainly ones I made before I joined here) and they're just so awful. XD Even a few of my newer pictures are the same.
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awesome! i like her whiskers x3
I think that maybe that she's too tall, [link] [link] , and her paws are a bit 'tall' as well.
Cats have quite flat and rounded paws and longish bodies. Also where a cat's back legs meet its belly they have nothing that pulls the flap of skin up, unlike dogs, so there's a hanging, furry flap of skin joining the underbelly to the thigh which you see on the first photo.
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Thank you so much! These photos will be really helpful!
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