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Published: 2009-10-04 13:17:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 10882; Favourites: 211; Downloads: 800
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This is 's sexy nerd 'Anita.'I dont do bw that often so I tried to find a balanced workflow for this. Im usually all over the place when doing these, using a different and unorganized workflow each time. Took some time, but I enjoyed this a lot.
Commission info - [link]
EDIT: RE-upped with arm changes. The shoulder was also too high on the last one I noticed. I appreciate the crits everyone
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I like it but the gun is a bit too small compared to the character, it's a bit bigger in real life.
But still, nice.
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I did change it. Here is the one before - [link]
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ahhh hI do see the change.... I think it's the shoulder to the elbow thats whats out of sorts. It seems as though it's only going as low as her chest, which is a pretty short distance. I think it should go more to the bend in her waist (mine goes a bit below the bend in my waist, but I'm a pretty big dood)
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Yea, I see what you mean. It should line up with the belly button. Since its all in black, it looks sort of ambiguous. It feels right but not at the same time lol.
Thanks for the input.
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no problem at all, thanks for hearin me out=]
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dunno how you get such great thickness and keep it awesome. nice man!
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i love chunky girls with glasses and/or guns... so you know i love this!
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got one big arm and a tiny one! haha nice work tho... id never be able to do anything close...
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Her left arm has a shoulder and forearm, it is missing the upper part of the atm, in short it looks like her forearm is connected to her shoulder.
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yo! thats niiiceee get the feeling of a game.like poster type for me but nice,heh cant lie thats a nerd i wouldnt want to cross heh
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I have to agree with =thelearningcurv that the shooting arm is way too short, doesn't fit right in with the anatomy
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such good work man very impressed, love the pose and the action going on. good stuff!
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Agreed, the front arm does look a bit weird. Otherwise, very nice!
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loks great, back arm foreshortened real well, but the front arm looks a little strange.
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this is damn beautiful=] my only gripe would be with the shooting arm, it's a bit short.... but everything else is gorgeous!
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This is absolute gold. The action in this is really captivating.
Only thing I see a bit off though is her left arm. It seems like it should bend down in the elbow and come up in the forearm. Seems like it just curves. But overall, a very kick ass piece.
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I can never praise your work enough. Anyone getting these is getting 100x their money's worth for the amazing work you do. Thank you, again
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Your welcome man! Thanks for the kind words
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herr, it looks awesome but...she just looks liek a 12 heads character ...it was suposed to looks like a fat(not really fat just fluffy 
but well you got it...i don't know if it is just be but thats the way i see he...awesome job anyway!
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I absolutely love the flow of this. It's so nice to see an average shaped girl - a realistic girl - in art. This picture not only inspires me (wow, look at those tones!) but also makes me feel great about myself.
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