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Published: 2005-09-30 04:03:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Just brushing up on profile head view. Please share critique on this one
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Comments: 16

iceburg9988 [2006-04-10 21:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! I really like the hair.

I have a few critiques, but they'd be difficult to just describe. I'd be willing to help you if we did it through pchat. I'll send you a note.

But I think I know what you did wrong, thanks to the guidelines you used that are still there. The main problem is that you dug INTO the main base circle. That's a big no-no. The big base circle basically represents the brain cavity. This holds true for any style of art, whether traditional or anime. Look here:

[link]

and here:

[link]

^ Look at the very bottom of that one.

Once again, I'll send you a note, but I hope that helps just a bit. I tried to do a redline, but I realllllly stink at using paint. Blegh.

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kata-thief In reply to iceburg9988 [2006-04-11 07:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow.... That has got to be the most useful comment I think I've ever recieved- especially with the links and everything. It was awesome ^^ Thank you so much for your help

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iceburg9988 In reply to kata-thief [2006-04-11 16:13:08 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I usually overdo it with critiques, so I'm glad it helped! :33

If you ever need any help, I'll try to help as best I can.

I'm your man! Er... Woman. No, wait. I like lady better. X3

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kata-thief In reply to iceburg9988 [2006-04-11 20:01:54 +0000 UTC]

I didn't think you overdid it... I think a lot of people underdo it S'all good ^^

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yphoenix [2005-10-07 02:58:01 +0000 UTC]

You're improving a lot!

The only parts that aren't so good are the ears (crazy small eh like the other guy said @_@)
and the line near the lips/mouth, is that supposed to be the mouth? because it's veeerey long... and uh... You could shorten it or actually leave the line out completely if you ask me.

But other than that, the picture is nice, the hair is especially nice

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kata-thief In reply to yphoenix [2005-10-16 06:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the critique Like I said, you do have to keep in mind that Anime pictures have messed up standards compared to other styles (but I'v already admitted about the crazy small ears) what with their noses and mouths, but i will try to improve on that

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WolvenViking [2005-09-30 22:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Durr... U sux. I hat U! I hat UR art!

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kata-thief In reply to WolvenViking [2005-10-01 02:07:51 +0000 UTC]

I know... I'm a bad person

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WolvenViking In reply to kata-thief [2005-10-03 14:00:19 +0000 UTC]

*slap*

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kata-thief In reply to WolvenViking [2005-10-16 06:26:46 +0000 UTC]

*bitchslap* to yo mama's face!! Even though she's my mom too...

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WolvenViking In reply to kata-thief [2005-10-17 03:43:39 +0000 UTC]

Please do slap her. She deserves it.

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kata-thief In reply to WolvenViking [2005-10-29 05:05:40 +0000 UTC]

No, you can do it. She's done more to you than me.

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WolvenViking In reply to kata-thief [2005-10-29 05:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...

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ScArletTearz76 [2005-09-30 04:12:19 +0000 UTC]

very shmexy, and if youd like my comments, my otly nitpicks,lol, are your ear looks a tad tiny and your missing a hole to beathfrom on your nose XD

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kata-thief In reply to ScArletTearz76 [2005-09-30 13:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Keep in mind that it's got the screwed up anime nose, but, yeah I always do my ears too small for some reason... I gotta stop doing that- thanks!

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ScArletTearz76 In reply to kata-thief [2005-10-03 02:26:02 +0000 UTC]

heh,lol <3

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