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laviikuto [2012-06-05 23:13:09 +0000 UTC]
men are idiots
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laviikuto [2012-06-05 23:12:46 +0000 UTC]
man are idiots
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wweloverofrko [2012-04-24 23:36:10 +0000 UTC]
for sure duncan fucked up big time!
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angelofdrama [2011-09-08 03:26:24 +0000 UTC]
weres 4??????????????/
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paulinaghost [2010-11-07 01:26:21 +0000 UTC]
your realizing this all just NOW duncan?
good chapter.
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xX-Callisto-Xx [2010-11-06 22:05:51 +0000 UTC]
You added an extra " before the part that goes She panted and sweated
The whole long dialogue around the part where you didn't tell who was who started getting a bit confusing. And no, it wasn't because you weren't telling who was talking. It was a bit confusing when Duncan would say something (But you wouldn't say), but Courtney would scoff on the same line. xP
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xX-Callisto-Xx In reply to KataraRama411 [2010-11-07 03:05:08 +0000 UTC]
Lol, no it's fine. It was still a wonderful chapter, I just had to read a few parts over because I was going "Didn't Courtney say the last line?...?"
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