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MegaAnimeFreak7 [2011-12-12 14:14:21 +0000 UTC]
who was the narrator supposed to be, cause i got the distinct feeling that it was Germany and that the bf was Italy. : /
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otakucellist [2011-12-08 00:08:04 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I remember this...so nice~
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KwatzHeWrote [2011-12-03 10:30:24 +0000 UTC]
Interesting cue and technique, it gives rhythm to your narration and speeds up the reading. There was a lot of suspense at the end.
Good work.
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akiyamamioluv [2011-12-03 02:26:39 +0000 UTC]
omg i couldn't stop reading! i'm glad you gave it a happy ending! you should be a writer...
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KatasumiHeyano In reply to akiyamamioluv [2011-12-05 00:05:49 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thank you, dear~! I need to get to work posting my other stuff; I've written another short story and I'm working on the fourth chapter of a multi-chapter thing...
I don't have enough time ;A;
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akiyamamioluv In reply to KatasumiHeyano [2011-12-06 02:35:26 +0000 UTC]
Lol I know!!! There's too much work and not enough time!!!
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KatasumiHeyano In reply to akiyamamioluv [2011-12-06 03:32:55 +0000 UTC]
I may actually start posting the first few chapters of that multi-chapter thing, tonight, though. They're already typed up.
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