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Published: 2014-02-26 00:52:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 371; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Description No, that is not a cigar, it is one of his chewies! I am really looking for some feedback on this picture!!
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TheIntern55 [2014-02-26 23:56:15 +0000 UTC]

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I really like this one!
I think the black and white makes all the difference here. It really differentiates it from the others you have. Although using black and white can be tricky sometimes, it really melds together here and I like that.
And also, it's an action shot! Obviously, that's not the most attractive face Tuker has ever made, but it's looks much better than just him lying down and makes it a bit more interesting for the viewer.
But, I think the focus should be little more on the nose next time to make the mouth look a bit better. And the right side of his mouth is kinda overexposed. This is just nit picky stuff, but I want you to know it so that it gives you something to build upon. I think we've told you these things before though, so you should know that's one of your weak points.
But overall, the improvement I see between this photo and some of your others is great! For a young photographer too, I think you are well on your way!

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Katelyn-Young-Photos In reply to TheIntern55 [2014-02-27 04:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate the feedback! I am definitely trying out new things with this camera, I haven't had it for very long so I am still getting used to it.

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arualcat [2014-04-26 16:38:52 +0000 UTC]

I like it! The bw effect is very beautiful!

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panicatthestudio [2014-04-05 15:28:19 +0000 UTC]

im with critique 4 critique.
very good picture. really cute and funny
i like the use of black and white and the blurred background allows for more focus on the main subject.
there arent many issues at all its very good. you balance out the lighter element and darker elements well and the shadows really help with this and u use just the right amount of negative space.
the only problem i can see that its a little on the light side but i truly meen a little. its not particularly noticable and its honestly pribably just my iwn personal taste not really a technical error.
please excuse my spelling btw im not very careful when i type sorry

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Katelyn-Young-Photos In reply to panicatthestudio [2014-04-05 19:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Norajenkins [2014-04-05 12:04:44 +0000 UTC]

That's cute! I love the black and white

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Katelyn-Young-Photos In reply to Norajenkins [2014-04-05 19:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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alexgphoto [2014-02-26 08:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully captured! Great b&w conversion too

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Katelyn-Young-Photos In reply to alexgphoto [2014-02-26 12:04:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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