katie455one [2004-07-29 01:05:14 +0000 UTC]
lol thank you very much i'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
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SpyderJade [2004-07-28 18:31:16 +0000 UTC]
Wow... very emotive and very real... I can see the dickinson influence here (which is a good thing) blending with your own voice. Good use of imagery... it reads well. Great work!