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Published: 2012-01-03 02:27:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 194; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Tired heart,
Crying heart.
A heart that hurts and yearns.
A heart that's broken, bleeding, blind,
By thorns that have pierced and torn.

This is the heart that I now have,
That beats inside my breast.
I can not stop the flow of blood.
The pulsing will not rest.
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AcaciaGreen [2013-08-27 02:49:20 +0000 UTC]

So relatable.... heart ache. And I like that you kept it generalized, so anybody can easily connect.

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Katragoness In reply to AcaciaGreen [2013-08-27 02:59:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you. I prefer to keep things generalized somewhat so people can find some sort of release from their own pain. :/

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AcaciaGreen In reply to Katragoness [2013-08-27 03:14:18 +0000 UTC]

yeah, thats good. sometimes your purpose is to help other people and sometimes its just to let our your own feelings

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Katragoness In reply to AcaciaGreen [2013-08-27 03:31:38 +0000 UTC]

mine is both usually. my poems stem from my own feelings. my own over flowing (often negative) emotions. Many times the words that come to me are more general. I don't often put names in my poems. I don't personalize them as much as some because I want others to be able to see that others share their pain. they aren't alone. and they don't have to fight those feelings alone. too many people think they're alone when they're really not. all they need is someone to understand. :/

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AcaciaGreen In reply to Katragoness [2013-08-27 17:47:56 +0000 UTC]

exactly. i read someone else's poem and i'll just have this random mental breakdown. its because other people feel the same pain. pain is pain, no matter where it comes from. sometimes, i feel like pain can give a better connection than joy and laughter. its deep and it goes down to the deepest darkest part of your soul. i try not to overly personalize mine as well, because then you lose that connection you can only get when a common pain is felt.

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Katragoness In reply to AcaciaGreen [2013-08-27 18:09:29 +0000 UTC]

indeed. *hugs* 

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AcaciaGreen In reply to Katragoness [2013-08-29 21:15:10 +0000 UTC]

*hugs back* the source doesn't matter so much as does the emotion.

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BakaJinx [2012-09-18 23:49:34 +0000 UTC]

oooh, it flows brilliantly and i like how it builds up!

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