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Kazuo-Kiryama — Agony
Published: 2006-04-20 19:50:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 963; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 15
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I awaken to the scent of death,My heart is on fire,
I gasp for breath,
Hatred fills me up inside,
Eternal death,
Have I died
Immortal agony burns my soul,
Infected pain that you control,
I slip into morbid darkness,
A throne of madness
I'm weeping blood,
A crimson lake,
My mind is now empty,
My body, stained with heartache
This eternal sleep
Taking over my being
I drift away, shaken
Never again to awaken
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Comments: 16
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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If only one day I can write a poem like that, I'll die happy.
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Wow. this is an absolutly amazing poem. I love the flow and your word choices are so intense! 
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I'm sorry.......if the darkness is the one to take control.......then you would have no soul to hold your heart..............a death......in darkness......is locked in chains.....eternally.....
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hehe, did you mean to put the poem in the 'Artist's Comments?'
I think you used the wrong type of 'thrown,' but you meant 'throne.'
Eitherwise, really good!
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oh flip,it is in artists comments!thanks for pointin that out,and that stupid spellin error
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hehe, glad to be of help.
Don't worry about it, I've seen others do that as well.
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The picture goes very well with the poem..
There's two things, however I want to point out.
I think the question marks on the last sentences of the last three paragraphs kind of kill the flow. I also don't quite know what you're asking questions about..
And, what is the meaning of "A is for Agony"? What's the significance of A other than being the first letter of agony? That one, I'm just curious about..
I like how this is written more than the subject matter. It's very well written, but the subject isn't as interesting. It's about how someone may feel as they die? (that's what I got out of it). Keep up the writing.
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Thanks,altho i think ur the only one whos bothered to read it(shame on u all!)
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