Comments: 9
Deryck-sama [2011-03-30 08:58:33 +0000 UTC]
Love the dress, just works wonderfully with you, including the red hair which is shown off due to the paleness of the dress. I love the form and way you are standing. The dress really works in the picture and shows off your body perfectly, minus the legs, which is one of your best features, it would have been nice to have a nice leg slit in te dress to show them off, but we can't have everyhting. It would also have been nice to have your right arm oriented slightly different than it is now. As it is, it looks a bit wonky in the area where it meets your shoulder and a bit further along the musle there. Facial expression could use sme work as well, it could be in part due to the lighting but it looks a bit funny, try making more definate faces that the camera can pick up on and ask for more clear lighting to show off your face. You have a wonderful face, no point hiding it in the shadows. The same goes for your eyes and maybe a bit more makeup to bring them out.
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Kelimation In reply to Deryck-sama [2011-03-30 21:07:38 +0000 UTC]
The lighting in this one really did come out "off" I think - I think I look cross-eyed in it. Unfortunately the ones where the lighting was better don't have as much movement. [sigh]
I'll mark it as good effort then, shall I?
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Deryck-sama In reply to Kelimation [2011-03-30 22:39:08 +0000 UTC]
Definately a good effort and more, it is unfortunate about the eyes, however the movement is a lot of shot and so normal wont even notice the light and eyes issues. Plus how often do you get to to wear something that just flows so well around you like that!
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Kelimation In reply to Amaya-Jade-Summers [2010-11-07 22:19:35 +0000 UTC]
Aawwwww. You're just too sweet. [showers in hugs and love]
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