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Published: 2011-09-16 08:22:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1175; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 21
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Just some Touhouvania Patchouli fanart. I haven't played the game yet but I've seen a video of it~ >w<;;
I personally liked Patchouli's outfit in Touhouvania, it looks much more better than her original one. |D;; Sorry, ZUN. OTL

I think I worked on this for err...4-5 hours? But I'm still not really satisfied with it though. D: The background looks too plain because I ran out of ideas. ;_;
And the pose is just sooooo unnatural. ||orz

Anyways, critiques would be appreciated~ ;v;

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Comments: 25

Akiro-Atalanta [2011-09-16 16:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I think this art is pretty nice. Colors are soft, anatomy not that bad, maybe except the eyes (a bit too large compared to the hands). I like the pink ribbon falling on her hand, there is something elegant that comes out from it.
Her book isn't bad at all, maybe not in her hand enough.

The image on its own just a bit too dark. Well in the other side, in Koumajou (Touhouvania) all seems so dark it actualy balances the soft side of Patchouli into darkness from this picture.
Her hair and ribbons are really beautiful, and her face delicate.

The background is empty, putting a piece of furniture on the picture should have been a good idea.
Although I love the pattern on the wall. Shadows seem correctly done, but the direction of the lights is a bit odd.
Is there some kind of window open on the other side ? Does Patchouli's "aura" move the lights ?

I gave 4/5 to originality, because Koumajou characters aren't that popular in Touhou groups. It's mostly Reimu, Cirno Marisa or Sakuya that are represented.

To conclude this critique, I'd say this picture is soft, a bit melancholic, but not as catchy has it should have been. Keep it on, I really enjoy this kind of fanart !

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KeroTohoFan In reply to Akiro-Atalanta [2011-09-17 00:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the critique! ;v;
I'll try to come up with more ideas for the background next time! >v<
And I'm glad that you pointed out some mistakes I wasn't aware about. : )

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CarbonWolf [2011-11-30 12:43:13 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! I almost see monsters coming out of those dynamically drawn shadows! 0w0 *faves*

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KeroTohoFan In reply to CarbonWolf [2011-11-30 12:47:16 +0000 UTC]

Aaaa, thank you!! <333 QwQ

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CarbonWolf In reply to KeroTohoFan [2011-11-30 12:54:44 +0000 UTC]

It reminds me of Beast's Castle from Kingdom Hearts X3

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Mad-Silence [2011-09-18 04:24:56 +0000 UTC]

YAY FOR RANDOM TITLES!!!!! *shot*
indeed truth,most of touhouvania outfits are better than original ones XD sorry ZUN,but i love touhouvania Yuyuko

Okay,lets get into the pic. is that even possible?
In short,i say that you did a great work with the light/shade work,i like how you draw & painted Patchy's hair,and the candles are awesomly well done!

GJ!

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KeroTohoFan In reply to Mad-Silence [2011-09-18 07:01:06 +0000 UTC]

YAHOOOOOO~!
|D;; I love Komachi's and Patchouli's Touhouvania outfit. <3 They're the besttttt. xD

*jumps into the picture*
Thanksss, Mad. ;;w;;

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PrinceShoutoku [2011-09-18 02:33:10 +0000 UTC]

It's Patchy and she looks fantastic! ;A;
Aaaaaa, she looks great. Her pose, the coloring the lighting, everything is so alkvedasl.
Seriously, your coloring. Is so hard to describe with good words. Because it's really good.

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KeroTohoFan In reply to PrinceShoutoku [2011-09-18 02:35:22 +0000 UTC]

sfkjhsalfasl thank you so much~! ;w;

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Porforever [2011-09-17 09:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's really great done, Tsuri, You got improved!!

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KeroTohoFan In reply to Porforever [2011-09-17 09:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ;v;
But I don't see much improvement though. D=

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Porforever In reply to KeroTohoFan [2011-09-17 09:23:45 +0000 UTC]

It simply that you can't see your own improvement clearly before taking your newest and long time older one to comparing!
My pleasure btw!

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NayruFaroreDin [2011-09-16 18:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh! 8D Nice!

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KeroTohoFan In reply to NayruFaroreDin [2011-09-17 00:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ;;w;;

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RuBerrychan112 [2011-09-16 17:50:16 +0000 UTC]

she looks cute~and love the candles ;v;

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Youmu-chii [2011-09-16 12:42:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't played Touhouvania but sounds like cool.Whatever this picture is awesome ^_^

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DottChan [2011-09-16 10:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Looks AWESOME!!
Love her visage, effects and everything xDD

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KeroTohoFan In reply to DottChan [2011-09-16 11:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Dott~! ;;;w;;;

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Ice7374 [2011-09-16 10:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh god the game XD
I died at Meiling's stage.

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KeroTohoFan In reply to Ice7374 [2011-09-16 11:06:05 +0000 UTC]

I... need to play it. >w>

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Ice7374 In reply to KeroTohoFan [2011-09-16 11:36:22 +0000 UTC]

IT WAS AWESOME.
Google it, and eventually you'll find it.

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lemon-sugars [2011-09-16 08:38:19 +0000 UTC]

I'd love you so much if you drew Remi's outfit from this game.
It's like.
my favourite <3 ;u;

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KeroTohoFan In reply to lemon-sugars [2011-09-16 08:40:46 +0000 UTC]

I might just draw everyone from Touhouvania~ owo
But it's only a maybe though. x)

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lemon-sugars In reply to KeroTohoFan [2011-09-16 08:41:30 +0000 UTC]

Oooh.
That sounds nice.
I personally love everyone's outfit that game.

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IndioBlack619 [2011-09-16 08:23:30 +0000 UTC]

great job

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