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kezfly β€” Rose
Published: 2017-02-21 15:23:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description ruby red with a tinge of blush,
soft petals with a stem of thorns,
honeyed scent spread in a rush,
yet a pinch of bitter when it was born.

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crimson red with a tinge of umber,
dried petals with a stem of /piercing/ thorns,
metallic scent spreads across the room faster,
yet an underlying sweetness when it’s gone.
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Comments: 3

StrangelyShiny [2017-03-04 01:11:27 +0000 UTC]

"/piercing/ thorns"
I love the emphasis on piercing, as if to say even something as beautiful as a rose possesses dangerous qualities. Roses are a flower I love as well, because they lend themselves to writing in so many ways. ^_^

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kezfly In reply to StrangelyShiny [2017-03-04 01:19:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! Roses are simply so dangerously beautiful! I'm glad someone else share the same thoughts as well. Thanks again for favourite and I hope you enjoyed the read!

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StrangelyShiny In reply to kezfly [2017-03-04 01:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Of course! Thanks for sharing your work. ^_^

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