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Kharta — Fate or Fortune -Ch7, p20-
Published: 2014-01-16 12:47:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1883; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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As it turns out he might not actually be stupid.A/N: Apologies for the delay. One of my close family members ended up pretty bad in hospital. There will still be delays yet.
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Notice: If anyone finds any mistakes or the quality lacking don't be afraid to leave a comment. I shall address each problem during a week after a chapter is concluded.
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Comments: 9
hope you family member gets "dehospitalized" soon
good job, keep going
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Thanks. I think my family member will be fine. I'll try my best to get the next page up soon.
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Yeah, you'll be surprised a few more times before this is over, Naoto.
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No kidding. First impressions aren't always correct.
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First panel, it should say "Detective Evans, was..." Proper English has a comma before a person's name or title in the middle of sentence when addressing them, or after if it is at the beginning.
Also, that smirk.
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No problem. I'm trained to notice errors like that.
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*Horatio puts on his sunglasses*
Horatio Caine: Well, I guess the perpetrator just...snapped.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=mR3jnW…
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Heh CSI Miami. Oh those were the days.
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