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Published: 2009-10-05 21:29:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 987; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Here is the second page of my Jack and the Beanstalk assignment. I am not so crazy about the art but all comments are welcome. It would be greatly appreciated if you could tell me if you understand what is going on since the assignment called for clarity in storytelling; thank you! Enjoy!

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Cutbelly [2009-10-05 22:06:20 +0000 UTC]

the frames feel pretty busy to me. theres so much information (visually) in each frame it sometimes gets muddled. however the progression of the story overall is pretty clear. the question you have to ask yourself is would someone who doesn't know the story of jack and the beanstalk (like someone from antarctica or something...) understand what is going on?

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