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Important note at the bottom for those of you who would reasonably NOT like to read this horribly long description!
This is a highly anticipated (by me) drawing of yet ANOTHER Soul Eater OC, although to be fair it is a continuation of one single OC. Here is Kishin Eimin, the madness counterpart to Kyosei. This OC is rather different, as Eimin is more of a conceptual character; Eimin and Kyosei are two different futures for my DWMA student OC. For a background concerning his past, link here: khimairi999.deviantart.com/art…
Quite frankly, you will want to read the description in the link in order to understand the rest of Eimin's story. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Just as Kyosei is basically the "good" path for the Souls returning to their whole form, Eimin is the "evil" path. Fear is the basis of what creates/ motivates a Kishin, and the Souls were afraid of being unable to return to their whole form, either because the prospect of consuming 792 Kishin eggs/evil souls, as well as 8 witch souls was too daunting (Kishin eggs are much harder to harvest than innocent souls, and witch souls infinitely more so), or because they fear that after all of that effort it may not work at all. Faced with the terrible prospect of being unable to become whole through these means, the Souls turned to consuming innocent Souls. They were able to keep their actions secret for a short while, but quite soon they were discovered by a fellow student.
Inflamed by fear, the Souls attacked and slew the student, then fled the DWMA. They fended for themselves in the wider world, constantly on the run from pursuing DWMA members hunting them. By the time one of them had caught up to the Souls, they had become stronger than expected from an extreme overhunting of innocent souls, and four of the pursuing hunters were killed. However, there was still one three-star meister who had belatedly joined the search. He was a very old friend of Kyosei's, and was often his partner when the two of them were sent out into the field. This meister refused to believe that the being that was once Kyosei would fall to the path of madness, and pursued the Souls in the hopes of bringing them to their senses. The meister happened to be a day behind the hunters, and so did not realize what had happened ahead of him. He was eluded by the Souls soon after.
As the Souls continued to eat innocent Souls, their rising madness caused their "appetite" to drastically increase, until they began to hunt Witches nearby, saving the souls for the future. Eventually it came to pass that their was a great gathering of humans for an unknown celebration, around 10,000 in number. The Souls had been planning a large scale attack for days, and when the moment was right, they cut off all escape routes and slaughtered the humans, consuming their souls as well as a few stockpiled Witch souls. This was enough to push the Souls over the edge, and in a great eruption of power, they transformed.
Within the collective mind of the Souls, all eight of them watched as the black mass that had been growing for years inside their mind pulsed once, then went silent. Without warning, eight dark tendrils erupted from the orb, latching onto the Souls, draining their emotions, power, and mentalities into the black mass, which burst forth into the now complete soul of Eimin. To explain, when Kyosei was shattered into the eight Souls, two other beings were also created. Kyosei became an embodiment of good within the collective mind, while Eimin was created as an embodiment of madness/evil. Both beings could not control the body as the Souls could, but they could whisper and influence the Souls as to the path to take. The consumption of innocent souls caused Eimin to become stronger and stronger, until he acted and absorbed most of the Souls into his own soul, gaining emotion and stabilizing his soul to become whole. Once this was complete, he entirely drained Kyosei's soul fragment of power, then obliterated the rest of him. All of this happened within a few seconds in their collective mind, and once it was over the body was controlled purely by Eimin, a new Kishin.
However, Eimin, who had been planning his release from the moment he was born, realized that for a Kishin to be perfect it must be the amalgamation of both a weapon and a meister (Asura was a meister, but he derived a lot of his power from Vajra, his weapon partner who became a part of him). To this end, Eimin used his newfound abilities to shift his appearance to that of Jishin, once the Soul of honesty, and then burned his own body while faking being unconscious. Kyosei's partner, who had relocated the Souls and had been closing in on their location for days, was close enough to see the explosion. He rushed to aid what he thought was still the Souls, and arrived to find what appeared to be Jishin lying injured on the ground in the center of the blast, unconscious. The meister ran toward the prone figure, and when he called Jishin's name while kneeling beside him, Eimin shot forward and grasped the meister by the neck, lifting him into the air while revealing his true form. He proceeded to absorb the meister, not simply his soul but his entire body, taking the meister's form into himself. With the fusion of meister and weapon complete, Eimin at last became a full Kishin, and the world trembled.
Following his formation, Eimin found a secluded region of land and founded the Military College for the Champions of Asura, also known as the MCCA. Eimin named his school after whom he views as a martyr for the cause of madness, and uses it to teach weapons and meisters the path of madness. His primary goal is to raise up a force of equal measure to the DWMA in an effort to create an actual war between himself and Shinigami, via the creation of Demon Swords (the madness equivalent of a Death Scythe). Eimin built his school by recruiting evil humans and rookie weapons and meisters, even witches if they wish to join. Not all of these understood what madness truly is, and Eimin often beguiles new meisters and weapon with the idea that madness is more natural than order, and that it leads to peace and prosperity quicker and easier. The first number of students were taught by Eimin himself, and upon becoming Demon Swords ascended to the rank of either Bishop or Crusader, while two became the Champion and the Patriarch/Matriarch. Bishops act as teachers, and relieve Eimin of the duty of teaching students, while Crusaders are sent on Eimin's orders to slay troublesome DWMA members, mainly Death Scythes and their meisters. The structure of the MCCA goes like this: Eimin presides over everyone else, and he makes the final decision on all matters of importance. Under him are two selected MCCA members: The Patriarch/Matriarch and the Champion. The Patriarch/Matriarch is the head of the Bishops, acting as a head of staff and organizing the Bishops, occasionally tutoring singularly powerful students. The Champion is the head of the Crusaders, and is in charge of organizing them as well as sometimes going into the field to kill a powerful DWMA member. The Patriarch/Matriarch and Champion also act as go-betweens between Eimin and the rest of the MCCA, carrying out his orders and relaying his messages and desires. These ranks are not set in stone, and if a Champion or Patriarch/Matriarch dies then their seat is filled by another selected member. This rank can also be challenged, and if the challenger proves themselves to be more worthy of the rank it is passed to them. Under that level then are the Bishops (which can be any gender, not just male) and the Crusaders. Under them are the Acolytes, the title for all student who are not yet Demon Swords.The students grow in strength by gathering the souls of lesser DWMA meisters and weapons in the field, occasionally by the MCCA member setting themselves up as bait to surprise a DWMA student assigned to kill them. Killing sprees are dissuaded, but two or three bystanders per mission is not chastised, especially if the dark student is seen killing a DWMA student. Eimin also does not tolerate infighting between regular and stronger students, as this weakens his forces as a whole, although non-physical rivalries are encouraged to push students harder. Weaklings are preyed upon however, and this Eimin usually ignores to force the weaklings to become stronger to defend themselves. Duels can be formally organized, as Eimin greatly enjoys watching combat as long as his soldiers will not be killed. No matter the strength, ally killing is punished by painful death.
With the MCCA, Eimin plans to eventually attack the DWMA in full force, hopefully eradicating it entirely. If the MCCA proves to be either equal to or weaker than the DWMA, this motive can be scrapped, as it is only an aside to Eimin's true goal: to break into the Death Room during the fighting and consume Asura's soul which is buried there (this follows the anime storyline. For the manga, Eimin instead plans on killing Shinigami and eating HIS soul). Eimin believes that this will transform him into a true god, although no one knows what may actually happen. For the sake of this, Eimin holds his madness wavelength back, waiting to release it only when the DWMA is utterly vanquished, a sort of arrogant ideal. To prepare for such a battle, Eimin does not sit idly around the MCCA. Instead, if a specific target of the DWMA has been repeatedly fending off or killing his students (these students have usually been sent out to kill said DWMA member)or even slew his Champion, Eimin will target that member himself, as they are seen as strong enough to warrant his attention. He then tracks and kills the target, consuming their soul. It is a method similar to a person selecting the perfect meal to satisfy their hunger instead of eating vast amounts of lesser snacks. This method also has an ulterior motive. Eimin has a theory that he can somehow restore the minds of the Souls via feeding them powerful souls, returning them to a state in which he can resonate with them. Some of you reading this might wonder why Eimin drained them of power in the first place, but this was a requirement for Eimin to become a Kishin, and as well to anchor the Souls to Eimin, allowing him to control them. If Eimin can "heal" the Souls' mental state, he would effectively have eight Demon Swords with him at all times, under his utter and full control, each of which could be resonated with, with the possibility of four resonations simultaneously. The power increase would be enormous, and leave him uncontested by even Shinigami. Whether or not Eimin can actually accomplish this, or if it is even possible is unknown, but Eimin still tries anyway.
In terms of personality, Eimin is a unique individual. As his soul was created by stealing emotions and personality from other souls, Eimin's own emotions are in fact out of his control. Where you and I can calm and elevate our emotions mostly at will, Eimin's emotions are constantly in an intense state, and he must mentally fight back to keep himself at ease. Because of this, Eimin has no middle ground in terms of emotion. Anger will go from irritation to utter outrage in a single jump if Eimin cannot hold it back. This is a heavy disadvantage in battle because if his emotions become to hard to control, Eimin will be forced to exit the fighting and mentally gain control again. As an actual personality, Eimin is cruel, arrogant, and idealistic in his own way. He sees madness almost as a religion or way of life, not simply a state of being. Eimin is not human, as he was first a personification of madness in the mind of the Souls, and as such lacks the moral balance that most humans have. Many concepts such as the value of human life or self sacrifice simply do not make sense to him, and this can lead to error in his own tactics and strategies. However, because no being believes themselves to be evil, Eimin's ideals are set in the idea that madness is better for the world as a whole. Humanity destroys itself by attacking whatever is different, but if the whole world was in madness together there would be peace. He also in spite of himself cares for his students to some degree. He enjoys watching them grow and learn, and even cares about their own ideals and goals. This has gone so far as to delay his plans. His original strategy was to attack the DWMA as soon as he had a force equal to their own, but factoring in his protectiveness of his students means that he must now wait to build a force that will not simply distract the DWMA, but crush it, as this will hopefully lead to fewer casualties on HIS side. This also means that when Eimin hunts for a meister he has targeted (above paragraph) his goal is not only to strengthen himself but also partially for revenge for his fallen students. He is not a misunderstood person, far from it, but neither is he WHOLLY evil. For example, he believes in madness as the only path towards perfection, and in his mind the destruction of the DWMA is tantamount to the death of a few to save the lives of the many. His cruelty is mostly directed at anything anti-madness, as his beliefs identify these people as heretics, who cannot understand the necessity of madness. He enjoys torturing and destroying his enemies the way a warrior might enjoy slaying those who would harm his friends and family. Once again, I am not saying that Eimin is actually a good person. His cruelty has a reason for it, but it is still cruelty and he enjoys it immensely, and it is therefore an evil. Eimin is very word conscious, and introduces himself as Demon God Eimin instead of Kishin Eimin because of its better phonetics (rhyming in his name sounds silly). This little tick causes him to become extremely annoyed at improper grammar and vulgar language, to the point that he will instantly cut off a monologue to reprimand an offender. Referring to him as Kishin Eimin annoys him to the extreme. He is also very appearance conscious, particularly of his suit. He prefers to stay away from dirt and staining material, and in rain he will even go so far as to have Kozui (the Soul of water) constantly shielding him from the rain, despite the fact that this renders Kozui unusable in combat. Rips and tears in hi suit affect him far more, to the point that he will retreat to repair his clothing. This also angers him greatly, and although his anger means he will attack more viciously, he loses his sense of battle strategy and tactics, and becomes easy to manipulate.
Concerning Eimin's new form, he now possesses all of the abilities that come with being a Kishin,as well as some abilities unique to himself. For one thing, Eimin's attacks center around this point: when Eimin absorbed the emotions and powers of the Souls, he did not utterly consume them. Instead, the Souls were left as husks, mindless creatures with no will of their own, tethered to Eimin in mind, body, and soul. They appear as growths on Eimin's own soul, and can be released into physical form. (An explanation for the appearance of the Souls: part of Eimin's theme is the nine parts of the dragon, and the nine parts are represented by the eight Souls and Eimin himself. The Chinese dragon has the neck of a snake, the belly of a frog, the scales of a carp, the head of a camel, the horns of a deer, the ears of an ox, the paws of a tiger, the claws of an eagle, and the eyes of a demon. As such, Jishin is a yellow lightning snake, Tsuri is a green nature frog, Kozui is a blue water carp, Kokoro is a purple psychic camel, Aisu is a white ice deer, Inazuma is a brown earth ox, Kasai is a red fire tiger, Nejire is a grey wind eagle, and Eimin is the demon. Each soul has a few physical characteristics of their animal, but does not transform into the animal entirely. For example, Kasai in the above picture is showing his full form, a humanoid torso with a few tiger features) The three creatures extending from Eimin's body in the picture above are an example of this. The Souls can hibernate within Eimin's body, and can be released by him at varying levels, ranging from one arm forming to block an attack from behind, to all eight Souls released as fully formed torsos connected to Eimin. Each Soul (although being stripped of it's powers) still possesses an affinity to a certain element. As such, to attack Eimin channels power into each Soul, allowing each one to attack with it's corresponding element (each Soul technically is able to channel any of the eight elements, but their affinities mean that channeling the wrong element through a Soul takes MUCH more power). The Souls also possess an incredible durability (NOT quite as durable as Eimin himself), as they are actually a part of Eimin's body, and so share some of his natural Kishin abilities. The Souls can also transform their bodies to an extent that they can form armor, wings, added arms, and more on Eimin's body. Each torso is mentally linked to Eimin, and as such Eimin can see out of their eyes and even speak through their mouths. The torsos do feel pain, but due to their lack of emotions they do not react to it as strongly.
Alongside this, Eimin being a Kishin means that he can wield his own weapon form. His weapon form as a Kishin is four weapon hilts, which he can rip free from storage in his body at will, usually from his back. These hilts are used mostly for blocking and deflecting strikes from an opposing weapon, as the hilts themselves have no offensive capabilities. They assist in refining and controlling the elements controlled by the Souls, as certain attacks with a lot of power use the hilts as anchoring points. The hilts are also used as a medium for resonating with his followers. Being both weapon and meister at once, Eimin can resonate with either type, with different effects. When resonating with a follower, one of the hilts will embed itself in the host's back, forming a direct pathway for Eimin's own wavelength and allowing one of his Souls to be implanted into the follower. Eimin's madness infused and thus unstable wavelength requires the Soul to calm the wavelength, allowing it to be grasped and used by the follower. Which Soul is used matters a great deal, as certain aspects of it influence how effective the resonance with Eimin is, ex. the Soul's attributed emotion, element, and even weapon form. (Boosters: the follower having the Soul's same emotion as a strong part of their mentality, if the follower happens to have the same elemental affinity which is rarer, and if a weapon's weapon form is closely similar or the exact same as the Soul's weapon form).
A meister becomes physically superior in every way, and their resonance ability becomes stronger. Unless the meister in question is capable of chain resonance this last effect is useless, but otherwise the meister will be able to increase their effectiveness with their own weapon partner, though the weapon itself is not enhanced at all. The meister gains a physical immunity to the element used by the Soul.
A weapon will also become physically greater, but far less so. Instead, most of the increase goes to their weapon form, which becomes far more powerful. It gains the element manipulation of the Soul being used, and even takes on some of the physical appearance of the weapon that said Soul represents. The resonance of a weapon is also boosted, with the same constraints.
Weapon forms: khimairi999.deviantart.com/art…
A list of abilities, including natural Kishin powers:
God-Like Combatant: Eimin is supremely quick, strong, agile, and durable. If an injury is non-fatal, he will heal it at an extreme rate. He is technically immortal, as he will never age, but he can be killed by a mighty enough attack(s) (unlike Asura who as the personification of fear could not be killed, only sealed).
Godly Soul Wavelength: Eimin's madness wavelength is inexhaustible, and effects all beings in a massive range who are not immune to it. Where Asura controlled the Madness of Terror, Eimin resides over the Madness of Impassion. This madness causes those affected by it to experience extremely intense emotion, which often varies between different victims.
Godly Intellect: Eimin is able to perceive and analyze situations rapidly, devising plans and tactics at a superhuman speed.
Elemental Resistance: Each of the Souls is invulnerable to its own elemental affinity, and can be used as shields to protect Eimin from those elements. This is not a perfect invulnerability, as the souls can be circumvented or distracted.
Attacks used by the Souls in full torso form:
Hellfire Tiger Claw: Kasai's arm bursts into flame and doubles in size, and he uses it to land a devastating blow.
Arctic Stag Charge: Aisu leaps up and forward as his antlers grow, forming icicles around them, and lands antlers first into his opponent.
Torrential Carp Barrage: Kozui's cheeks puff up as he rears back, and he releases a series of water blasts from his mouth as his fins stand on end.
Hurricane Eagle Bomb: Nejire flies into the air, then dives as his feathers extend, forming a spear of air around his claws.
Thunderstorm Cobra Strike: Jishin rushes forward in a ricocheting motion spinning like a drill, forming a set of fangs out of lightning while his hood expands, which he attacks with as he speeds past.
Mountainous Ox Rush: Inazuma charges, horns swelling and tearing up the ground in front of him, and he wrenches his head upward to send stone crags stabbing upward.
Wildwood Frog Lash: Tsuri lowers his head and his torso ripples, then whips it upward to release multiple thorny vines which lash across his opponent..
Mindblast Camel Cannon: Kokoro curls up, his hump pulsing, then opens violently, sending a blast of psychic energy forward.
Exalted Soul Formation: the Souls fuse together into one massive torso extending from Eimin's stomach, which has a more demonic appearance than an animal one. It has two large arms and two smaller ones under those, as well as a third eye, but otherwise looks just like the rest of the torsos in rainbow coloring.
Emotional Wavelength: Eimin weaponizes his emotions, using both Kokoro and the Soul corresponding to the emotion. Eimin pours his emotion into the Soul, which becomes a mirror-like object with a stylized frame. Kokoro then sends a blast throught the mirror, where the blast changes color and becomes wider. If it hits, it drastically amplifies the emotion used. This attack is a double edged sword, as Eimin must give in to an emotion in order to activate it, and he may not be able to calm it afterward for some time.
- Forms: Force of Apathy, Force of Courage, Force of Terror, Force of Sorrow, Force of Jubilation, Force of Rage, Force of Envy
Hello to anyone reading this! I had this idea, and it is probably kind of stupid and no one will like it, but if you would like to join Eimin's MCCA just for fun, then comment on this deviation and become a part of the ranks of madness! This really has no other purpose other than a fun idea (like joining a DA group just for the sake of being part of a cool group), but if you join i will likely give you some kind of reward in terms of points. If you feel like it, comment about what rank you would like, be it Acolyte, Bishop, Crusader, or even Champion or Patriarch/Matriarch! First to ask for the last two is the first to get it (for a description of rankings, read the seventh paragraph from the top)!
So yeah, comment to become a part of MCCA today! Hail Asura, glory to Eimin!
Comments: 38
tonicthehedgehog115 [2016-10-14 18:44:35 +0000 UTC]
// I would seriously love to join this.
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Khimairi999 In reply to tonicthehedgehog115 [2016-10-15 02:08:36 +0000 UTC]
I'm really sorry dude, but this thread has been dead for a while. It was a fun idea while it lasted.
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Khimairi999 In reply to tonicthehedgehog115 [2016-10-16 21:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Is there any more to that picture? Does he have any weapons/powers/etc?
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tonicthehedgehog115 In reply to Khimairi999 [2016-10-16 23:18:54 +0000 UTC]
// not really. It was made to be a mystery skulls OC but if he was a soul eater OC he would have long ranged weapon like a sniper or something like that. He wouldn't exactly have powers but would run faster then most other people. If that helps.
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tonicthehedgehog115 In reply to Khimairi999 [2016-10-17 19:59:07 +0000 UTC]
// he's curious and usually likes to explore. Tends to care more about others then himself as well. He's also calm and collected about stuff unless his curiosity takes control, then he's very excited about it. //
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Khimairi999 In reply to tonicthehedgehog115 [2016-10-18 03:45:27 +0000 UTC]
A Kishin also tends to be an evil, maddened character. Does this character have any negative traits, or any traits that would come out if he went insane?
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tonicthehedgehog115 In reply to Khimairi999 [2016-10-18 03:57:54 +0000 UTC]
// if he want insane? I guess his curiousity would be his most notable negative trait but, think of stein in that sense. But if I did add another negative it would be that he would self harm.
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Khimairi999 In reply to tonicthehedgehog115 [2016-10-17 18:37:38 +0000 UTC]
Also some artistic questions: is that hair on his head or some sort of toque? Is his one sleeve rolled up or is that a bandanna? Is that a watch or a bracelet? And am I allowed to change his eye-color?
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tonicthehedgehog115 In reply to Khimairi999 [2016-10-17 19:34:21 +0000 UTC]
// I tried to make it his hair but I guess that clearly failed. Go with toque. That one sleeve is rolled up and it's a watch. I will allow you to change his eye colour.
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Khimairi999 In reply to tonicthehedgehog115 [2016-10-17 18:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Would you be willing to give me some DA points (aka buy a commission) or were you thinking of just a request?
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tonicthehedgehog115 In reply to Khimairi999 [2016-10-17 19:33:00 +0000 UTC]
// I was just thinking of a request. I don't have the money to get DA points... 😓
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Khimairi999 In reply to tonicthehedgehog115 [2016-10-18 03:44:46 +0000 UTC]
That's fine! I don't mind doing this for free, especially since I haven't had much motivation to draw my own things lately.
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FeatherWings1638 [2015-01-09 21:47:58 +0000 UTC]
This actually sounds really cool. I'd like to join.
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FeatherWings1638 In reply to Khimairi999 [2015-01-10 19:54:05 +0000 UTC]
I did read it, and while I got the jist of most of it--by the way Eimin is kickass!--it was a little confusing. I think you should start another storyline.
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Khimairi999 In reply to FeatherWings1638 [2015-01-10 22:32:32 +0000 UTC]
Sounds good. Currently, we are waiting on replies from the other participants.
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Khimairi999 In reply to FeatherWings1638 [2015-01-11 19:37:45 +0000 UTC]
If you want to! I would love to read about your character, and keep in mind I wont kick you out even if I happen to dislike your character (That wont happen, and anyway you saw Kokkinosman9. We can handle some Mary-Sues).
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FeatherWings1638 In reply to Khimairi999 [2015-01-11 19:55:38 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I'll note you my bio.
Also, keep in mind that there probably will have to be some adjustments to be made if there can only be one kishin in the roleplay. My oc--Elisaid--was supposedly the next kishin in the regular world of Soul Eater, but that can be changed.
Plus the only relationship Elisaid has with any of the main characters is Kid. She's never met him and wants to kill him.
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Khimairi999 In reply to FeatherWings1638 [2015-01-11 19:59:07 +0000 UTC]
Of course I wouldn't want to bog down your own character, but can we keep Eimin as a Kishin? Elisaid could be his heir if you like, or whatever you want.
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FeatherWings1638 In reply to Khimairi999 [2015-01-11 20:16:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's what I thought. Of course, I'll make the adjustments. Maybe Elisaid could be a Crusader or something.
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Khimairi999 In reply to FeatherWings1638 [2015-01-11 20:34:07 +0000 UTC]
Mmmkay. Feel free to talk to me about what you want for your character, I don't want to steal all of the power.
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SpiderFan1 [2014-07-12 01:21:33 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing.
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forefes [2014-05-18 23:11:07 +0000 UTC]
Name/Alias: Medoza
Rank: Champion
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Ilovefanfics8 [2014-05-18 17:50:55 +0000 UTC]
I wanna join! Can I be a crusader?
Please! :3
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Khimairi999 In reply to Ilovefanfics8 [2014-05-18 19:22:23 +0000 UTC]
I would be perfectly willing to induct you into my ranks, but first i would need a character. Can you show me a deviation or whatever of your OC?
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Ilovefanfics8 In reply to Khimairi999 [2014-05-19 03:53:44 +0000 UTC]
I just made them but I haven't posted them up yet I'll give you a small part of the story though
Meister/weapon: Nina redstar
Weapon: red rebellion
Before Nina and red knew each other, Nina was traveling with black star and her brother nick after the star clan was killed. Nina, black star, and nick were only six and they were trouble makers. They would steal from the rich and, when they were desperate, from the poor. One day, on nina and black stars 8th birthday, they were heading to a different city when they found a Kishin. Since black star didn't have a weapon he took nick while Nina made her arm transform into a sythe. They started fighting the Kishin but Nina got distracted and was almost killed by the kishin. Nick pushed her out of the way in time but was killed himself. After that day Nina became more cautious and more serious.
One day Nina got sick and black star went to get some soup for her but never came back. Nina didn't know what happened so she didn't jump to conclusions. She eventually got better and went to find black star.
She never found him but she found red in an ally getting beat up by two girls calling her mean names. "Now why are you doing that?" Asked Nina. "Why don't you mind your business stupid bitch!" Yelled one of the girls. Nina never liked being insulted not even as a joke. "You might wanna take that back before I rip your heads off!" Yelled Nina. The girl who insulted her laughed and turned into a double sided blade while the other one caught her. Nina just laughed. Nina, being born with an insane side in her, kept on laughing as she let her insane side take over. She let her arm transform into the first thing that came to her mind. The weapon her mother was, a hatchet. You see Nina was born with being able to turn into any weapon of her choice and when she had a weapon, they would be able to turn into any weapon of her choice.
When the girl tried to hit Nina, Nina moved away swiftly and hit the girl on her back. Red got up, she was tired but she could let the stranger fight by herself. Red turn her arm into a katana and started fighting with nina. Nina grabbed red's arm and when red changed into her weapon form and, instead of being a katana, she was a pistol. Red gasped as Nina shot at the girls who insulted her. When Nina was about to kill the girls she stopped herself. Nina's sane side came back and she just stood there with red pointed at the two girls.
"Your lucky I came back to reality before I killed you. If it was up to insanity she would have just killed you" Nina said. Insanity was what she called her insane side. Insanity and Nina would sometimes have conversations when Nina was sad, mad, or lonely which would happen a lot. "Now leave before I change my mind" Nina said. The two girls got up and ran as fast as their legs could take them.
Red transformed back into her human form. "Thank you for saving me. My names red rebellion, from the dragon clan, or at least one of the few remaining" said red. Nina looked at red's arms and saw dragons on both of them. On the left arm blue and on the right arm red. Then Nina looked at red's hair and saw three white stripes on her long, red hair. "My names Nina redstar, one of the two remaining from the star clan. The other one, who was my best bud black star, disappeared, when he went to get some soup for me since I was sick, two months ago. A week before our tenth birthday. I'm not that worried, black star can handle himself. But with that big ego of his, I hope he finds someone who could put up with him like I did, with his goal to surpass god one day" Nina said. "How come when you grabbed me I turned into a pistol and not my usual form a katana?" Asked red. " I was born with being able to transform, or make my weapon transform, into anything I wanted." Nina replied. After that day Nina and red were inseparable.
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Khimairi999 In reply to Ilovefanfics8 [2014-05-20 00:54:27 +0000 UTC]
Okay...just so you know, i think your OC is really cool, and I am in fact honored that you would want to join my group. However, I must say that your OC at this point is kind of a Mary Sue. I wont tell you to change the character, you can do what you want, but this character i sadly cannot accept into the MCCA, if only due to being overpowered. If you feel i am being unfair or hypocritical, I apologize and will listen to your greivances. If you DO happen to change the OC or enter a different one, I will still be happily open for acceptance. Sorry, and no hard feelings, kay?
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