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Commission for ~krazedkeiRaven Beartrap (c) krazedkei
Moar 10 bucks commissions here: [link]
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Please Respect my gallery
if you don't like it ... don't look at!
Constructive critics are welcome
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Comments: 63
this is, overall, a nice piece, but a few constructive crits for you : )
her breasts dont really make sense, they are positioned too high up. if someone with large breasts did do that and pulled it extremely tight (which would be painful which is neither here nore there) from the angle youve drawn it, her nipples would be showing, and not behind the leather. atm they are a bit balloon like : )
also, i find the thick lines of her features distracting compared to the thin lines of everywhere else. if anything, there should be the most delicate parts (eyelashes, liplines) yet they are the most defined. also, her left eye looks a bit too slanted and a different shape to the right.
the composition feels a bit cramped, as if the focal point was her breasts and the rest was squashed in. if this was your intention then thats fine, but personally, i think a little more zoomed out so at least her other shoulder came into view would look lovely.
good work and keep it up, hope you dont mind the critique! xx
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sexy :3 i luv her hair color really goes with the look :3
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as always you RULE chank...i just love her expression^^
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O/////o very nice... and sexy xD
but... why you always do big boobs??? xD it be a little fun do it xD
nice art ^^
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Very, very hot read head kitty 
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No sΓ© por quΓ© xD Pero creo que esta es la chica de cara mΓ‘s bonita que has dibujado nunca OwO' Me gusta mucho ^^
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nice job nee, heh creative shirt or should i say straps? maybe i should get a commission from you, and watch out for that flue aye
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GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRR, my Original character was named Dark Raven, though its nothing like this.
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OMFG this is fantastic
This may be my new favorite commission
you were able to bring out her sexiness
...wow GREAT JOB
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You sure as hell could trap a bear in between those!! Wow.
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i love the way you make their boobs squished up some times XDDDD i think thats really sexy
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nice!
are the eyes two colored? they seem blue at the top, and green at the bottom.
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Oh my god... O_O Just... PERFECT!!! Nice job Karla
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Wow! You seem to be very busy with commissions!!!!
Well, at least you get money for it! XD
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los chicos sexyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyys >.π: 0 β©: 0
Hey, I'm not trying to disrespect your art, but I have to say that this piece is very disrespectful towards women. You've created an impossible standard of "beauty" and have totally objectified a woman's body. I can tell by how you've painted the face of the girl that you're a very talented artist, so why give her huge boobs when it makes her look disgusting and draws people away from your work? You're not the only person to do this... but why?
Feel free to delete this comment, I just felt the need to voice my mind.
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This is a commission
My commission
This is what she looks like
and what I asked for
as for as "impossible standard of beauty"
its a drawing
they tend to be unrealistic
and this character is a goddess
so she might look better than a normal human
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You do know the artist IS a woman right?
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wow hot , how does she get into that top "she must need help lol " very nice work
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she looks hot, and almost ready to pop out O///o
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Skimpy clothing..... check
Goggles that look like cat ears.... check
aggressively sexy attitude with matching sword.... check
So very sexy Neko.
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LOOK AT THE o.o EYES!!!! They gorgeous!!! They're illuminiated...also...I dare ALL to try to keep their eyes fixed on her eyes he he see how long you last!
You know...that sword looks like if it cut you...it'll give you a disease or something GREAT JOB!
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mmmmmmm, who is that hottie and may I help unwrap those leather straps? LOL XD
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