Iki-Fujisaka [2015-07-19 09:38:30 +0000 UTC]
*rolls rolls*
Your doujinshi is one of not so many which are worth of reading.
Most of DB doujins follows GT/has unoriginal characters/repeats scenes from DB(!)/has boring plot/doesn't have a plot at all/all in one.
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kibasennin In reply to Iki-Fujisaka [2015-07-19 10:16:12 +0000 UTC]
Thing is, I'm trying to develop a character, a story. One should not see this as a doujinshi, but as a stand alone manga by itself. It has a beginning, an evolution. And the end is known to everyone: Vaboru will die. It is an inevitability. So the question is: wha kind of a man will he have become when he dies? Will he still be a weakling? Or does strength come in more various forms than just muscles...?
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