roe-ru [2011-09-24 09:00:27 +0000 UTC]
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I'll start with the pros of this piece of wonderful art from you. I have to admit, the girl is really cute! Your coloring in this one doesn't seem awkward and the shading is smooth, especially the hair shading. Even with her busty figure, she looks really cute!Cons: Don't use a god-forsaken white background. It bugs the hell out of people sometimes, even myself. Maybe a gradient background or a transparent one would do nicely for this.Second: One word, Anatomy. Her arms are too skinny. Her forearm is fine, slightly thick but it's fine but the biceps part down to the elbow of her limb is just too thin.Overall, I enjoyed the picture still. ^_^
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CoyoteMoon80 [2011-12-28 20:54:31 +0000 UTC]
nice coloring
DeadCobra [2011-09-25 19:44:57 +0000 UTC]
Nice
FascinatedOWL [2011-09-24 06:37:42 +0000 UTC]
I really like your style and her outfit.. the shoulders look a bit right though.. but good job
CoyoteTony [2011-09-24 01:59:26 +0000 UTC]
Nice! She looks real gorgeous! I don't really see anything wrong with it thus far.
Poc-e-Star [2011-09-24 01:05:19 +0000 UTC]
AW MAN!! This is so awesome and I just love the outfit! her hair is kyute too! I like ur style!
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Kimmiku In reply to Poc-e-Star [2011-09-24 01:08:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks im so glade you like it