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Kirahero — Sign of Spring

Published: 2011-03-15 20:45:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description The roots of the dead plants
stay in their ground
to escape the coldness and the disease Winter brought that killed the others.
Through the cruel rain and snow,
they wait for the day.
The day that Winter shall be overthrown.

Finally!

Spring comes and breathes life into the earth,
rejuvenating the roots.
The roots push through the soil
to meet the life giving sun.
A stalk forms and a fragile bud opens up.
Scarlett petals show themselves to the world
amidst the colors of others.
At last Spring had come,
and gave birth to new life.
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Comments: 3

Tenshilove [2011-03-16 21:19:47 +0000 UTC]

YAY FLOWERS!!!

so pretty.
Ur word choice really paint the picture in my head. I love the personifications too ^^ ♥

u rok

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Kirahero In reply to Tenshilove [2011-03-17 00:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm thinking bout trying a rhyming poem from the pov of daniel as he goes through the castle... Not much experience on rhyming poems... Any tips?

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Tenshilove In reply to Kirahero [2011-03-17 01:58:01 +0000 UTC]

use big words -,- idk ill ask abby.

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