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Published: 2011-05-09 12:33:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 50508; Favourites: 1457; Downloads: 514
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Description Sorry, its took too much time to manage second part >_>
But, finally you can read whole story \^0^/

First of all, I must say that I wanted to try and make some photo-comics for a long time. And when some friend told me this story, I immediatly think: "this plot is really suited for this".

But it took another couple of mounth to find such beautiful people as Men Jia and Lan. Or it was a good luck, really xDDDD Both of them is very good in ordinary clothes and almost without make-up, which was my obligatory request.
After further cogitation I devide storyline into two parts, becouse I thought that it will be better than 16 different pages. But if you think otherwise, please tell me what should I do. It is my firsrt attempt to made something like this, so all critics will be appreciated!

Also I think I want to try more... I am fan of horror movies (btw, have you seen Insidious? Its really cool!) and games... And I already have one good creepy story xDDD If will agree play main character, you will see new story very soon

So,

Aiko Lan (Aiko兰) as Zhi Yong
Men Jia (门夹) as Li Xin
Asahikawa Arashi as Wife

All photography, editing, idea by me,

Special thanks to for spelling checking

First part of story--->>>

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Comments: 412

mangasockattack [2013-02-15 15:29:19 +0000 UTC]

That was great! Very spooky~

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locktheflow [2013-02-14 23:25:35 +0000 UTC]

I've read this story as a creepypasta. I never knew you were the original author! That's so cool!

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RubyDaSquirlz [2013-02-14 14:23:08 +0000 UTC]

I was afraid this was gonna be that one Korean comic that activates itself while you scroll through it that gives you heart attacks...
Obviously this wasn't but it was creepy enough!!
Very well done!!

I want more of these. X3

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Singing-Wolf-12 [2013-02-14 03:22:32 +0000 UTC]

Well.....forget sleeping for the next couple of days! -_-' I get scared way too easily...

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EMOPIGU101 [2013-02-14 03:11:10 +0000 UTC]

holy shit a massive shiver went down my spine when I realized what that 'red tape' was FUCK SO CREEPY but brilliant very original c:

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Raingrass [2013-02-14 01:36:13 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed your stories. Looking forward to next new story.

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always-cosplay [2013-02-13 23:22:50 +0000 UTC]

that was horrifying. I loved it.

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flowerpower138 [2013-02-13 22:47:01 +0000 UTC]

DDD:
i love it!

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Ginpachisenseii [2013-02-13 22:27:51 +0000 UTC]

oh god.. <3

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LullaTheOtaku [2013-02-13 21:03:35 +0000 UTC]

woah... didn't see that coming! great!

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Tataouin [2013-02-13 19:47:47 +0000 UTC]

OMG the ending totally scared me! It was so creepy!!! x3 You are so good at telling horror stories! I wish to see more horror stories from you!

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woodenpen [2013-02-13 17:05:11 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I forgot to mention that her red eyes seem a bit bright. You can kinda tell you altered it with a program. Maybe make it a bit duller or change the layer type to burn?

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woodenpen [2013-02-13 17:02:50 +0000 UTC]

Dude thats fucked up. Love it though :3

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oneisallallisone92 [2012-07-24 03:44:10 +0000 UTC]

I grabbed my heart too! Great comic!

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Pisces-sayonara [2012-06-09 07:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhhhh
I heard this ghost story a long time ago,
there's always something different ...

Scared me!! ):

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kissingdolls [2012-02-16 02:48:34 +0000 UTC]

It's from a hotel somewhere. ;D seen the story before but couldn't remember which hotel they say it was in. ~ <3 <3

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chibipandas [2012-01-27 20:21:33 +0000 UTC]

oh my gosh! my friend told me another version of this a few years ago!! oh my gosh i was so freaked out!! but the cosplayers look amazing so it lessened a bit XD

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TheHugOfSungLi [2012-01-25 14:33:57 +0000 UTC]

wonderful

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angelofpurity15 [2011-10-17 01:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, so it was her looking out the keyhole at him. Creepy o_O

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darkwings16 [2011-10-07 23:00:12 +0000 UTC]

haha, i heard this story the other day^^ creeps me out every time, though and seeing the red when i already knew what it was made it even creepier

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Eternally-Me [2011-09-21 03:27:40 +0000 UTC]

That sent chills down my spine when I saw her eyes. Awesome. Just. Awesome.

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Momochan287 [2011-09-10 01:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Creepy but good!

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NatsuPi [2011-09-08 18:01:30 +0000 UTC]

this freaks me out! good job!>w👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Meitalink [2011-09-06 06:36:01 +0000 UTC]

New story would be awesome~!

Very well done, all of you! You should make more these kind of stuff!

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His-little-wolfie [2011-09-03 16:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Very creative and different way to tell a story. Great job

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artbynoni [2011-09-02 21:48:03 +0000 UTC]

This was beautifully done i take my hat off for u ^^

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DerCouch [2011-08-23 21:59:42 +0000 UTC]

My heart literally shuddered when it said that her eyes were red. This was beautifully done, I applaud you.

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Distant-Devian [2011-08-15 19:23:01 +0000 UTC]

This is one of my favorite creepy pastas!! Wonderful job

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Silver786 [2011-08-14 05:49:28 +0000 UTC]

HUUU ;_; Creepy

But epic !

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YureiGloom [2011-08-03 02:39:29 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's cool! I totally shivered in the end... And I came back to see the 'tape' then I... Gosh, it kind of scared me! The photo before the husband is dead is super cool! I loved the ilumination! The overflow of the story is great too.

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Lizalot [2011-08-02 18:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh I know the variation of this story. Very well done!

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Marisabel-Janna [2011-07-30 15:08:24 +0000 UTC]

Классная история!+-+ Жду новой истории=**

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iiUmexX [2011-07-22 15:11:25 +0000 UTC]

my best friend told me this story, but her version was of that he was on vacation in florida and he stayed in a motel. i like how you made it intense at the every beginning : D

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anime-overdrive101 [2011-07-18 06:02:09 +0000 UTC]

that was awsome i loved it

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zukorules4ever [2011-07-15 19:38:31 +0000 UTC]

so creepy.. that red tape was actually her eye
i wouldn't want to live there anymore..
btw, the story is epic win
i'm waiting for more

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Bahtun [2011-07-15 09:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Niiiiiice,i got goosebumps

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peacemaker2222222222 [2011-07-15 03:24:09 +0000 UTC]

oh i read a story like this but she looked through the peep hole but I scared now O.O

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RaspberryGrenade [2011-07-03 22:24:22 +0000 UTC]

At first, I thought they were dolls! They have such perfect skin. <3 Ahhh<3

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KaulitzWolf [2011-07-02 10:56:53 +0000 UTC]

...woah

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babylonianprince-3kp [2011-06-19 14:12:59 +0000 UTC]

I've heard this story before, though with different characters, but this one's probably one of the best

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Junsui-chan [2011-06-19 00:08:45 +0000 UTC]

ah brilliant. ive heard the story before too ^^

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Chryseilas [2011-06-17 18:15:27 +0000 UTC]

O_O. i literally jumped. T_T its was so scary~ but awesome >.> im gonna have nightmares.

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Chryseilas [2011-06-17 18:14:44 +0000 UTC]

O_O

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eternaldays [2011-06-17 17:11:02 +0000 UTC]

OHH I remember my friend telling me this and she had to explain the 'red tape' was actually her red eye. LOL I'm surprised that you knew this story too o_o

*wipes sweat* I've never encountered key holes where I can actually peep through. XD I hope I'll never will encounter one. *shivers*

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Bella-ran [2011-06-14 23:51:16 +0000 UTC]

That is so scary! But so cool! XD

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ThatOneCommenter [2011-06-14 20:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Very creepy o_o Well done!

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LadyCeleste [2011-06-14 14:40:54 +0000 UTC]

more!!! I want to read more!!!

moe!!!^^

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starburn [2011-06-14 13:04:01 +0000 UTC]

Ooou, that gave me shivers! Oh my goodness...

I think I had stumbled across part one earlier, and it is awesome to now see the whole story! Augh. Shivers though. Oh my god.

Well done. INCREDIBLY done!

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cooliodude012 [2011-06-11 16:17:23 +0000 UTC]

wait... can you see through keyholes? e.e

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news-from-bree [2011-06-08 14:28:53 +0000 UTC]

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