Comments: 15
Raqonteur [2020-04-16 13:33:16 +0000 UTC]
This is bright and eye-catching. I think the plain white background really works for you here and makes the page stand out. I'm not quite so sure about the border but that's maybe a matter of personal taste
I like the way you've lit the main character with his own lightning. And feeding off that you can see the importance of each of the triad here by placement and size/depth of colour. Going into the story even before they read the first page they know who the story is about. It's a nice storytelling device that could let you lead into the main character's introduction in a different way. Very interesting/creative.
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LordCherryPaw [2020-04-15 22:22:34 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWW!!! This looks so cool, bro!!!! O.O
Good job!!!
Crap, now I wanna do it... XD
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LordCherryPaw In reply to Kitanokata [2020-04-15 22:35:34 +0000 UTC]
You're so very welcome. ^w^
Keep it up!!!
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Kitanokata In reply to SpaceCastaway [2020-04-13 09:42:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
I was thinking about adding a background but feared it might get overcrowded. Initially i wanted to put a drawing of The Five Pillars (the city) there but I decided against it. The cover style was heavily inspired by Naruto. I know that Kishimoto-sensei has some crazy cool backgrounds but I wanted to be like some of his leaner ones (like this or this one ). I might think of putting something as background later, but I can't promise .
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rainbow000pegasus [2020-04-11 22:08:49 +0000 UTC]
I really like the style and the usage of the swirly elements!
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