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Published: 2011-06-30 19:22:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1168; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 8
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Showing you guys my progress on humans at the moment.Still needs work, but I think I'm improving.
Tell me what y'all think C: (Don't be too harsh! I am still learning)
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Hey you are very good at it and your style matches so perfectly to it!
wow so cute :3
I would definately commish you for humans as well
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yes you are improving! she kinda looks like a lion girl because you always draw lions. but it's so cute!
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*enters "gentle criticism" mode*
This is... well, pretty good actually!
The pose seems natural, but the hair needs to be a bit more... flowy? wavy? And it needs to fall a bit to the left, what with the laws of physics and gravity, etc...
Try doing a more realistic one next time, that way you learn way more easily!
Here comes the criticism... D: (Oh no!)
Make sure that the shoulders slope downwards (although the upwards curve isn't too noticeable for her left shoulder, considering the pose and style), and try to define the upper arms a bit more, in terms of the curves, so they're not completely straight lines.
Aside from all of my harsh, scathing and un-called for criticisms above, this is really great! Keep practicing and you'll get better and better!
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She's really adorable!
I can't say much, because you're evolving your own style of humans 
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Oh! Also I just noticed, the hair looks great the way you did it, but because of the way her head is tilted, shouldn't it fall down more in the back? Right now it's kinda defying the aws of gravity.
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I like this a lot! But you should draw a realistic one next, ya know, just to mix it up.
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i would say put more "flow" on the hair and make it more lush, other than that great job 
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im no one to speak, cuz i cant do humans myself, but the best advice i was ever given was to watch your shoulders and neck. remember, a neck is strong and supportive, yet dainty, and the shoulders slope down! my art teacher told me. ^^'
anyway, this is really cute kit!! i ADORE your eyes and her facial is adorable. ^^
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Humans!!!
I'd give you advice, but I'm in the same boat as you. They're so different than felines and canines!
I wish you luck, kitchiki
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aaw, haha. Thankyou shem, you too!
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This is really cute! :3 Humans are a bitch to draw dlfkj why do they have to be so difficult? 
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wow, that is REALLY helpful advice 8D thankyou sashra!
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ace! really glad to see your work on humans looks good well done and love her eyes
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its good. the hair and eyes are great,so is the body. work on the mouth ^.^
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