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kitty4eva — Pool Of Tears
Published: 2006-07-14 13:16:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 189; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description This pool of tears,
lying on my pillow,
each night drop by drop,
forms another pool.
As the night passes
awoken to my life,
living it the way it is,
only to come back to,
another pool of tears.
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Comments: 9

salvatore-shan [2006-08-07 17:28:56 +0000 UTC]

It's short but effective. Honestly, Em, that is one of the best poems I have read. It's so emotional and I love it.

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kitty4eva In reply to salvatore-shan [2006-08-08 14:57:53 +0000 UTC]

yey thankies! love you

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salvatore-shan In reply to kitty4eva [2006-08-11 20:42:23 +0000 UTC]

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kitty4eva In reply to salvatore-shan [2006-08-12 10:51:32 +0000 UTC]

aww its so cute! lol

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smelly-fairy [2006-07-16 18:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's really great. Love you!!!! Wish I could write, even a sentence would be good. But alas... Only joking!!
Seriously, it is really great, you can get a good image from it.

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kitty4eva In reply to smelly-fairy [2006-07-18 18:09:06 +0000 UTC]

thank youfor adding it to fave! love you too!

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smelly-fairy In reply to kitty4eva [2006-07-19 12:42:23 +0000 UTC]

okie dokie,

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homo-bell [2006-07-15 11:41:46 +0000 UTC]

that is really good huni ... better than anything i could do ... i love u lots, make sure u remind urself that .... i am only a phone call or txt away ... love u lots n lots

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kitty4eva In reply to homo-bell [2006-07-18 18:06:10 +0000 UTC]

yes i know i love you too! your poems are really great too!

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