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i'm sorry, but i must point this out. eclipse, pg. 105. so many typos there... -_-' well, not many, but more than i ever see on one page.
here's what it says, (lionpaw's dream)

"Lionpaw!" tigerstar's deep yowl roused him. he blinked open his eyes to find himself lying on bare ground, surrounded by close, whispering pine trees.

He was daydreaming.

Scanning the gloomy forest, he spotted his nighttime mentor padding from the trees. Hawkfrost was already sitting in the needle-strewn hollow, his amber eyes glowing in the half-light.

"i hope you're ready," tigerstar warned. "i'm going to teach you how to knock any warrior off his paws, no matter how big." He beckoned Hawkfrost forward with a flick of his striped tail.

Lionpaw stretched his claws. "what do i do?"

"you dont have the weight to overpower every cat," Firestar told him. "That will come in time. Until it does, use your size to your advantage. you'll have to be fast. dart underneath your enemy's belly, slashing the back of their forepaws as you go. they'll twist, expecting you on one side, but you'll be at the other to catch them off balance."

DID YOU NOT SEE THE TYPOS??? i mean, first of all, hawkfrost's eyes are NOT amber. they're ice-blue. second, it said that firestar told him he doesnt have the weight to overpower every cat.

sorry, but i just like pointing out rare typos in good books thats the whole reason i drew this picture, actually

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i'm sorry, but i must point this out. eclipse, pg. 105. so many typos there... -_-' well, not many, but more than i ever see on one page.
here's what it says, (lionpaw's dream)

"Lionpaw!" tigerstar's deep yowl roused him. he blinked open his eyes to find himself lying on bare ground, surrounded by close, whispering pine trees.

He was daydreaming.

Scanning the gloomy forest, he spotted his nighttime mentor padding from the trees. Hawkfrost was already sitting in the needle-strewn hollow, his amber eyes glowing in the half-light.

"i hope you're ready," tigerstar warned. "i'm going to teach you how to knock any warrior off his paws, no matter how big." He beckoned Hawkfrost forward with a flick of his striped tail.

Lionpaw stretched his claws. "what do i do?"

"you dont have the weight to overpower every cat," Firestar told him. "That will come in time. Until it does, use your size to your advantage. you'll have to be fast. dart underneath your enemy's belly, slashing the back of their forepaws as you go. they'll twist, expecting you on one side, but you'll be at the other to catch them off balance."

DID YOU NOT SEE THE TYPOS??? i mean, first of all, hawkfrost's eyes are NOT amber. they're ice-blue. second, it said that firestar told him he doesnt have the weight to overpower every cat.

sorry, but i just like pointing out rare typos in good books thats the whole reason i drew this picture, actually