zep [2001-08-26 11:30:40 +0000 UTC]
Cool poem, even the structure looks great!
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skyOrange [2001-08-26 09:58:02 +0000 UTC]
"..another train ride."
but certainly not just another poem. this is terrific. everything you said leaves a clear image - the movement, the sound. it makes me feel like i'm watching a b&w movie. great poem, kni.
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