Atomic-Clover [2009-07-01 17:17:04 +0000 UTC]
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wow, your use of watercolours is REALLY nice, i really love the feel i got from this picture. AFLAJLFAJ THE WATER! HOLY CRACKERS THE WATER IS AMAZING. you coloured it PERFECTLY i love all the colours and tones you put into it, a bajillion times better than any water i could ever do, and the sun-rays/lighting in the top right corner really adds a nice effect, overall i give the colouring a 10/10. it's beautiful. and you really know how to shade and where to put shadows!
As for the figure, he reminds me of Tidus which is perfect 'cause then you accomplished making Sora look like an adult, awesome job! the only critiques i have is on the anatomy. Sora's body and limbs seem a little stiff to me, and with sora's left leg behind his right like that, it kinda looks like he's tripping side-ways rather than walking forward. Making ppl look like they're walking is EXTREMELY hard, i hate making limbs in perspective, but that's what needs to be done to his leg to make it look less awkward. Same with sora's right arm, it looks really... stiff. and the way his hand is positioned looks a little off, and i think it's because the angle of the hand doesnt match the angle of the elbow.
Sora's face looks great though, you kept his boyish look but still made him look older, well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
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