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Hadoru [2014-10-10 05:58:00 +0000 UTC]
Elbert looks... bored. Bored and perhaps annoyed. He was always depicted as an incredibly warm and kind man, I don't think his face portrays it. Everyone else is spot on, but Lord Elbert's face bugs me a bit. Perhaps a small smile? Or warmer eyes?
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Koto-wari In reply to Hadoru [2014-10-13 15:25:06 +0000 UTC]
I wanted to for content and caring, but apparently that got lost while inking. I hope that nowadays I'm a bit better in drawing expressions that portray what I want them to portray.
Editing traditionally drawn pictures like this is not easy, though... so I probably won't go back to it (it's been 4 years, so yeh).
But thank you for your comment~
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DnMStarsi In reply to Hadoru [2014-10-12 02:34:50 +0000 UTC]
IMO He's probably tired but is trying to spend time with his family.
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Grabbergirl11 [2011-11-19 05:19:26 +0000 UTC]
she probably inspired elena, mist and ike's mother, [link] her path of radiance artwork she looks more like Eleanora.
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Koto-wari In reply to Grabbergirl11 [2011-11-25 12:16:05 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, they share some resemblence.
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Grabbergirl11 In reply to Koto-wari [2011-11-25 18:45:45 +0000 UTC]
yes, classic fe characters inspired other fe characters. I learned Kurthnaga oringinated from two FE characters, Kurth and Naga.
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Koto-wari In reply to Grabbergirl11 [2011-11-25 18:59:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh, waw. That's quite interesting. :0
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Grabbergirl11 In reply to Koto-wari [2011-11-25 19:05:41 +0000 UTC]
yes, klein inspried leonardo i guess.
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Grabbergirl11 In reply to Koto-wari [2011-11-25 19:55:02 +0000 UTC]
yes, kurthnaga looks like girl during the 3d sequences. [link] I don't know why, he never uses a knife but, has one in his official artwork [link] I can see why he never uses it in the games, he hates war and blood. Sothe uses his knife all the time. Ok, probably the only time Kurthnaga uses it is for survival. I think he's so-so to me I don't like him. Ugg, Almedha's ugly, is it her clothes or she's just fat.
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Koto-wari In reply to Grabbergirl11 [2011-12-02 18:34:13 +0000 UTC]
He probably uses it in the same way that other laguz use Beorc weapons.
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Grabbergirl11 In reply to Koto-wari [2011-12-03 00:13:03 +0000 UTC]
ok, but, it's rare for him battle in his human form.
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Koto-wari In reply to Mojofooka [2011-07-03 23:53:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! ^^ I'm glad you think so. ^^
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Professor-Tammi [2011-05-25 14:51:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, Little!Eliwood - he's really adorable! I find these kinds of family pictures really cute, and Eleanora looks so peaceful here. ♥
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Koto-wari In reply to Professor-Tammi [2011-05-26 07:24:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. ^^ Glad you think so. :3
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AnimaMasterLilina [2010-04-08 20:53:04 +0000 UTC]
awww x33 a beautiful family
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rubyqueen808 [2010-04-07 12:20:28 +0000 UTC]
This is so sweet ^^
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Raiyna [2010-04-07 04:14:32 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I really like it, Kippy! <3 I don't know why you said there were too many blues and purples and reds, I think it has a nice hue about it~~
Firstly, for constructive criticism!
The first thing I noticed was that Elbert's too short! If you look at his torso, and then where his knee bends, the thigh is too short. You would either need to foreshorten it more, or bring it out around Roy's body more~ The same goes for Eleanora. Her thighs are much too short compared to her torso. You should either bring her legs out more, or make her torso a bit shorter~
However! Everything else looks just fine! <3 I like the fact that there is no other background, because it gives more focus to the family. I like the figurines that Roy's playing with, and I surely love all of the emotion on their faces. <3 You can really tell what each is thinking, and I think that's a wonderful part of this picture~~
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Koto-wari In reply to Raiyna [2010-04-14 10:50:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Shannon. :3 Maybe it turned out better than during the WIP.
Yes! *reads it with an open mind*
Yes, I thought so as well. I have troubles pasting people behind other people.
*Eliwood.
I see, I noticed Elbert's anatomy wasn't all well, but I though Eleanora was okay. Thanks for pointing that out.
*Eliwood. :3
I'm glad it shows. :'D
Thank you for taking the time for writing it. ^^
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Raiyna In reply to Koto-wari [2010-04-15 00:14:11 +0000 UTC]
OH SNAP LOOOLLLLL
I totally didn't realize that I was writing "Roy" the whole time! xDD I guess it really does show that baby!Roy and baby!Eliwood look exactly the same o3o;;;
And of course~! I'm always happy to help, as long as I don't...hurt your feelings or anything ^ ^;;;;
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Koto-wari In reply to Raiyna [2010-04-17 18:03:24 +0000 UTC]
^^'
They do look alike, but Roy's hair is more "wild". XD
I based Eli's hair on Adult!Eli... not on Baby!Roy. But, it shows that they're family, and very closely related.
Ah, no you don't. : D
I'm happy to read critical comments since they help me improving. I litterally beg for them.. because I get them too few..
It's hard to nearly impossible to change a finished work, certainly when it's traditional, but I still like to get them for future use.
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K-ayu [2010-04-07 03:46:38 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! *O*
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Koto-wari In reply to K-ayu [2010-04-11 13:49:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. ^^
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