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krazyklaws — The pack - page 14
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The Pack comic, page 14 - Rough version. As always comments/critique is encouraged!Related content
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Keep it up :3 I like reading this and I like your style :3
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It is very good! Whot will happen next? XD I can't wait!!!!
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Great crit from Awrah. Didn't notice it myself, but makes sense. I love the interaction between these two.
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Very nice, but I would make the close ups of Ranger (I think it's him) not line up with the head and muzzle so much. Maybe zoom in further on the nose. If you do mean to have them line up like that, maybe it would be better to just have a shot of his face? I'm liking where it's going, very tense and I already have a very good idea of who the characters are just by reading this one page. I look forward to seeing more!
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Thanks for the comments! I'll keep these notes handy for revisions later.
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