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Description It makes me think of twisted fairytales
Compressed, the words wearing the lie like a performer
You should know that,
Ctrl + Del doesn’t work here, you can’t just X the box
And my lies are melting away from the words,
Their blistering skin leaving patches of
“I love you and please don’t talk about her”
But you can’t see this
It’s staring you in the eyes and you are
A blind man.
But hiding from me nonetheless without
Thinking.
You don’t see that I know this and I know we can never have
I love you and mornings in bed and nights in heaven

The story has no happily ever after
But
What story really has a happy ending?

(At least, that’s what I tell myself to keep myself from falling apart and breaking up and crying out and hurting you)
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Comments: 9

AluminiumSiren [2006-04-28 21:06:47 +0000 UTC]

it's really nice, not crap at all!

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kreecha In reply to AluminiumSiren [2006-04-29 18:59:00 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much

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AluminiumSiren In reply to kreecha [2006-04-29 20:35:26 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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BASSETSKETCH [2006-04-27 20:49:44 +0000 UTC]

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kreecha In reply to BASSETSKETCH [2006-04-29 19:00:05 +0000 UTC]

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parlanchina [2006-04-27 19:00:43 +0000 UTC]

what are you talking about? its a good poem with a sound structure; it's raw, as if it came from your soul

xx

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kreecha In reply to parlanchina [2006-04-27 19:01:49 +0000 UTC]

It did... you know who

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kawaiitenshiMitsuko [2006-04-27 18:58:08 +0000 UTC]

This is not crap!!!! i love this poem specially the bit wer it says
"It makes me think of twisted fairytales
Compressed, the words wearing the lie like a performer"

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kreecha In reply to kawaiitenshiMitsuko [2006-04-27 18:58:53 +0000 UTC]



Thankyou

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