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Published: 2015-04-14 21:07:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1380; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 19
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NEW OC!!!!!!!She's South African (if the colours didn't give it away)
She doesn't have a name yet... Suggestions anyone?
I'm planning to make a comic for her, in which case I'm definitely changing the helmet (imagine drawing that 334 times).
She has 6 main powers she uses, represented by the colours she's wearing.
Blue - water manipulation
Green - can make plants move according to her will, as well as rocks and sand.
Red - can produce fire and control it's heat
Yellow - can shoot bolts of lightning and "ride" a lightning bolt to teleport short distances (can only use this a few times)
The last two are the most powerful
White - Energy manipulation. She can absorb and release energy freely and convert energy from one form to another.
Black - Can freely control gravity within a 5 meter radius.
A bit OP? maybe, but she's still in early development so... hope you like
By the way I am available for commission. for more details, click here -------> Commissions Open!Ladies, gentlemen, penguins! Welcome one and all.
So I finally sorted out my paypal account, which means commissions are now open.
These are the prices:
Line art :
Portrait $5
Waist Up $8
Full Body $10
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Black and White:
Portrait $15
Waist Up $18
Full Body $20
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Basic Cell Shading:
Portrait $25
Waist Up $28
Full Body
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Comments: 31
Nice colors and overall rendering. Really nice simple, iconic costume.
I think she is definitely over the top with the powers. You may find yourself having difficulty writing stories and creating threats for her to face. Some limitations and maybe a (Kryptonite like) weakness would help. Maybe she can only manipulate, not produce the elements when she is in her homeland, kind of like Captain Britain (Marvel).
As for the helmet it looks a bit insect-like or alien. It doesn't quite have the elegance of the rest of her outfit. Someone mentioned making the triangular shape from the flag on her face. I agree that that might look cool and tie it all together nicely.
Lastly her name; Do you know of an Afrikaans or Swazi word that means something like Elemental, Of the Earth, or maybe something that means Omni, or Multi, in reference to her abilities?
Or maybe it's something as simple as Unity.
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Your is much appreciated. Thank you very much
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Omg I cant get over how crisp and smooth your stuff is.
It's pretty cool Idea but whoever would be her villains?
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Right? Her villains will need to be pretty badass to stand up to her. I have a few ideas in mind... hehehe, watch this space
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indeed. And a villain that can challenge her... I have a lot of work ahead of me. thanks for the comment
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I like the concept, prehaps for the new mask, have the 'y' point of the flag go over her face? Could be a cool visual element
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Oooh! I like that. That is a great idea. Thank you.
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Interesting concept. More a name, I suggest Panoply. She has a panoply of superpowers.
My only critique is that she seems to have WAY too many superpowers. Are there limitations to her powers? Maybe she can only use a superpower for a limited time. Maybe she can be like Ultra Boy from the Legion of Super-Heroes, able to only use one power at a time.
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oh yes, there are definite limitations and weaknesses, otherwise things would be too easy. I don't want her to be a "Superman" type. She can indeed only use one power at a time. the two universal powers (black/gravity and white/energy manipulation) she can only use for 5 minutes a day before her nose starts bleeding. I'm also playing around with the idea that, early on at least, she can only use her powers in a specific sequence. Like, water, then earth, then fire, then lightning etc. which means if she wants to use lightning for example and she's on water, she'd have to first go through earth and fire somehow. This would make her especially vulnerable to someone who knows the sequence and can predict the next power. But she's still very much a work in progress and her powers are subject to change, probably depending on the type of villains I put her up against.
Thanks for the crit, it's very much appreciated. And the name too
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You're welcome! 
I'm thinking as limitations, maybe she can only use one power at a time, and each power for only a certain length of time. And maybe once she uses a power, she can't use it again for a certain length of time.
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Time limits huh? It would definitely make things interesting, force her to fight more tactically. Thanks again, you've given me quite a lot to think about.
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You're welcome!
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