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korrohinaru [2016-02-19 14:38:48 +0000 UTC]

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First of all, this is a really decent piece of art! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> It looks really neat and it has tidy line art and shading, and the character is proportionate as well. The border and the background are not too busy, so it immediately directs attention to to the character. The border complements the character's design very nicely as well!

While the design of the character itself is detailed and well laid-out, the colouring seems rather incomplete. More shading can be done on the hair, neck and tendrils to give more sense of depth, and the wire poking from her left arm seems to have incomplete shading judging from the irregular colouring. While the character's back has shading from the assumed lighting, the flower on her back doesn't have similar shading to reflect the same lighting. The eyes, too, look incomplete from the intersecting lines, although that might just be a stylistic choice.

The design framing the character looks alright with its fitting patterns and colour scheme, although personally I feel that a more elegant font should go to the word 'heroine' and the name of the character.

In conclusion, this is a good piece of art which is decently executed, though fine-tuning and tweaking a few minor details here and there would have brought about a greater impact for the viewers. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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cutelightangel [2016-05-03 14:52:56 +0000 UTC]

wow you've improved a lot (since dec 2015)!! Sorry I only just noticed it now ...

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maesemurgo [2016-04-18 12:21:18 +0000 UTC]

She is very original (sorry for my inglish, im very bad)

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Akimitsuki44f [2016-02-24 05:52:30 +0000 UTC]

This is a very nice drawing and I like how you've made it into a card!

Since you submitted this to Get-gud, I will give you my thoughts and critique on it as a fellow member:
-First of all, I would like to say that your anatomy is very very good! I can't help but notice that the arm in the front seems quite a bit thinner than the other arm from the elbow to the hand. Maybe it is because of that, but the hand also seems to look a bit too small when compared to the rest of the body. 
-I am very impressed by the way you do your shading, especially in the hair and the back of the shirt. Personally, I think you were a bit lacking in the shading of the skirt and could probably have used darker colours like how you did on the back of the shirt. I also notice that you seem to be missing the shadow that the metal band would put on the skirt.
-I do like her outfit overall, but I feel you could have added a few shadows to show how the ribbon on her back folders. This might be a helpful tutorial for understanding ribbons: Learn Manga Basics: Ribbons
-I know that eyes are a stylistic thing and each person prefers their own way of drawing them, but I feel it is quite important to have darker areas in her eyes to denote the pupils. The way it is right now, I can't help but see the big yellow highlights as the pupils and it feels quite off when looking at the eye which is closer to the viewer.
-This part is not really a critique, but I like the concept of making character cards and I think you've pulled off quite a nice border for it!

I hope this was helpful in some way, and keep up your amazing work!

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OhTacoAnime [2016-02-22 22:17:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice eye candy .3.

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