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mischief-in-action [2012-10-03 06:15:03 +0000 UTC]
Lovely work, Jenny! She looks so carefree and happy in it, and the colours are beautiful!
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melodiousglenndog [2012-10-03 05:36:17 +0000 UTC]
As I have already mentioned...this is my favorite of your works so far. I just think she looks extraordinary. Wonderful job...dearest!!!
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Thesis-D [2012-10-03 02:45:06 +0000 UTC]
Something you're not understanding*
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Thesis-D [2012-10-03 01:31:31 +0000 UTC]
Its a good base to start with if you decide to finish it or make something more of it. As it is now, the flow of the dress is pretty decent, but could use more to take advantage of it.
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Lady-Compassion In reply to Thesis-D [2012-10-03 02:28:08 +0000 UTC]
What are some suggestions on how to give this a more 'finished' look?
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Thesis-D In reply to Lady-Compassion [2012-10-03 02:42:30 +0000 UTC]
Well, you could work a bit more on the hair. The dress and hair are the two key features of this picture that draw the attention, much more so than the character. Try working on individual strands of hair for a more natural look rather than implying them with color. This means actually going in and more or less layering the hair (the way you would when getting your hair cut), or drawing it in groups and sections so that the hair seems to flow more freely and is not as bunched up. This would require alot of work though, and because you said this was just a sketch, I didn't want to say anything that might burden you with the idea that you should have tried harder or spent more time on this than you either wanted to or felt you needed to for what you planned to do with it. Personally, I think its fine if you intend to keep it this way.
I'm also a little frustrated at myself, because, being self taught and lacking any formal training, I lack some of the diction and artistic language to express what I mean exactly, even though I know what it means and can demonstrate it. So if there's something I'm not understanding, feel free to ask questions.
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fraterchaos [2012-10-03 00:44:27 +0000 UTC]
nice one Jen!
maybe stash just thinks you are a perv? LOL
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fraterchaos In reply to Lady-Compassion [2012-10-03 02:47:31 +0000 UTC]
have you been doing anything st.ash might consider unsavory where it could see you?
LOL
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Lady-Compassion In reply to fraterchaos [2012-10-03 13:43:10 +0000 UTC]
You know....the ONLY thing i can think of is that I post my fractals in the RAW category??!!?
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fraterchaos In reply to Lady-Compassion [2012-10-03 18:09:56 +0000 UTC]
lol, well I have not run into an issue with that, but I seldom use st.ash... but when I did, they were RAW too...
LOL
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InstaStud [2012-10-02 23:20:46 +0000 UTC]
i feel like dancing with her
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Lady-Compassion In reply to Artemisia79 [2012-10-02 22:34:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much....I really appreciate the comment!
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