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Published: 2012-02-16 03:34:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 3907; Favourites: 286; Downloads: 38
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Description The tears are running down my face,
As I think of you,
Leaving stains of tears and make up,
All along my cheeks.

I replay the only memory,
That I have left of you,
Pausing it,
Rewinding it,
Looking at a picture of you.

It hurts so much,
Too much to bear,
The thought that you,
Are gone forever.

I would give anything,
Just to be in your arms again,
To see your face,
To touch you,
Just to say my last goodbye.

Some people think it's pathetic,
To still cry over you,
But fuck them all,
I still miss you,
And I just want to say goodbye to you.

Oh and by the way,
I love you.
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Comments: 63

ladybuglovesorange In reply to ??? [2012-07-05 19:56:51 +0000 UTC]

I know how that is... But it will get better eventually ok?

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MockingJay1256 In reply to ladybuglovesorange [2012-09-11 23:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. It has gotten better since.. :/ but it still hurts, you know?

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faceless16 [2012-02-17 03:01:19 +0000 UTC]

oooh is that a zest of anger I detect in there? Sounds a little bitter sweet to me

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Total-Anime-Fangirl [2012-02-17 02:52:07 +0000 UTC]

tears look kinda gross >.>

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musicgypsy [2012-02-17 02:49:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh crap, I had a horrible dream last night that my boyfriend died. This is exactly what it felt like....awh it hurts soo bad to be in this sort of situation and I'm glad it was only a dream for me but for other people it's reality....I'm sorry Beautiful poem btw, simple but heartfelt and raw.

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to musicgypsy [2012-02-25 05:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you that means a lot to me, and i had a dream like that once :/ it was horrible

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Daskone [2012-02-17 02:46:53 +0000 UTC]

INCREDIBLE pic & poem! makes me think a lot again of my loved ones. This is going into my favorites!

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to Daskone [2012-02-25 05:30:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sooooo much!

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hippiegirl500 [2012-02-17 02:46:23 +0000 UTC]

i so understand -swinkly eyes-

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to hippiegirl500 [2012-02-25 05:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Yea

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RoseTheUnicorn [2012-02-17 02:41:52 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to RoseTheUnicorn [2012-02-25 05:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you

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Hellshiel [2012-02-17 02:38:14 +0000 UTC]

How do I live without the ones I love? Time still turns the pages of the book its burned Place and time always on my mind I have so much to say but you're so far away (8)

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chiuahuahXlover [2012-02-17 02:37:22 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of someone special, no not a lover. A best friend. Man, he was best friends with the world I tell ya... Only the great die young.

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to chiuahuahXlover [2012-02-25 05:31:23 +0000 UTC]

I know someone like that, shes amazing

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chiuahuahXlover In reply to ladybuglovesorange [2012-03-12 22:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Keep her dear

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Hellshiel [2012-02-17 02:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Its a fucking shet not being even 30 and start buring childhood friends

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to Hellshiel [2012-02-25 05:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh god im sorry

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AzureBlue11 [2012-02-17 02:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwww....

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Cannon273 [2012-02-17 02:18:11 +0000 UTC]

My feelings. 👍: 0 ⏩: 0

PopCornSalt [2012-02-17 02:08:52 +0000 UTC]

I hope things get better for you

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to PopCornSalt [2012-02-25 05:31:59 +0000 UTC]

So do I 👍: 0 ⏩: 0

xgsx [2012-02-17 01:53:45 +0000 UTC]

soooo sad i love it!

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to xgsx [2012-02-25 05:32:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank You

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MockingJay1256 [2012-02-17 01:53:00 +0000 UTC]

oh my freaking god!!!! i once really felt like this!!! i was going CRAZY over this one guy and he hates me for it...
but i moved on! as it says my signature at the bottom... ^^
the guy who hates me now is featured in this deviation that i uploaded today!
[link]

dont forget to read the description

and very nice preview picture!!

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to MockingJay1256 [2012-02-25 05:32:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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MockingJay1256 In reply to ladybuglovesorange [2012-02-28 21:55:20 +0000 UTC]

you're very very welcome! and i hope things get better 4 you... 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

ladybuglovesorange In reply to MockingJay1256 [2012-03-02 00:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Me to

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MockingJay1256 In reply to ladybuglovesorange [2012-03-02 00:26:30 +0000 UTC]



you have my sympathy...

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Fallenpeach [2012-02-17 01:46:59 +0000 UTC]

So sorry for your loss.. Hope you'll feel better soon. I'll be praying for you I know this feeling, it's horrible..

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to Fallenpeach [2012-02-25 05:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for that <3

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Fallenpeach In reply to ladybuglovesorange [2012-02-26 02:39:51 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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K9mkIV [2012-02-17 01:45:52 +0000 UTC]

Doctor/Rose, anyone?

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Airkey [2012-02-17 01:42:36 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful!

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to Airkey [2012-02-25 05:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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machmaste [2012-02-17 01:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome ]<:)

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Keeska-and-Tasu [2012-02-17 01:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work...

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TheMartyred [2012-02-17 01:30:33 +0000 UTC]

really good. I love the way it starts off really poetic and sweet and emotional and then stays just as emotional but then gets sort of angry. It takes a lot of guts to use a line like "FUCK THEM ALL!" and in most cases the profanity is unnecessary and ruins the emotion but when it's used right it's a great emotional tool. amazing anyway.

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to TheMartyred [2012-02-25 05:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks that means a lot

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nomad005 [2012-02-17 01:21:33 +0000 UTC]

Self-pity crap I just got over. If the person left you, they aren't worth thinking about. Ever. Don't dedicated a poem to that person, what sense does that make. My ex is a selfish bitch. Period.

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to nomad005 [2012-02-25 05:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Its about my dad...

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nomad005 In reply to ladybuglovesorange [2012-02-25 13:24:03 +0000 UTC]

Put foot in mouth, then swallows. *Hops off with on one leg.*






Sorry to hear that

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to nomad005 [2012-02-26 05:08:22 +0000 UTC]

Dont worry about it

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nomad005 In reply to ladybuglovesorange [2012-02-26 12:33:34 +0000 UTC]

No I should, and I should know better. It just hit a nerve, but I shouldn't apply my experience verbally to anyone's else, bad habit.

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SaphireShadows [2012-02-17 01:09:20 +0000 UTC]

Umm...wow...this really fits the situation I am in right at this moment. Thank you for this...it really helps me.

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to SaphireShadows [2012-02-25 05:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Anytime

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daiokaio [2012-02-17 00:56:26 +0000 UTC]

I love how the tears are of similar color to her eye... Good Poem too.

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ChisaiiNinja [2012-02-17 00:52:57 +0000 UTC]

I like this, but I have a critique. First I will say that I am trying to be helpful, so please do not be offended.
I think that you overused commas a little bit, and that the voice and mood are not cohesive. I do really like this, though. Not a hater!

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ladybuglovesorange In reply to ChisaiiNinja [2012-02-25 05:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for that I really like it when people are truthful about my work, cuz I do have ALOT of room to improve

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ChisaiiNinja In reply to ladybuglovesorange [2012-03-03 03:07:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm really glad you appreciated my criticism. I hate stupid comment fights. Glad I could help!

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