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KimDingwall [2012-08-25 05:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Ack. So much emotion here. How!? Especially as their faces are kind of emotionless.
Nice work!
Hey, if Iris is a s/he, how do you get around that when you write about her/him?
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Laitma In reply to KimDingwall [2012-08-26 17:40:30 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh, well, I kind of work through the eyes of the characters that see Iris, since I never narrate from Iris's POV. Mostly, for Seth, he sees Iris as a child that resembles his little sister, so he thinks of Iris as a "she", even though (I think I've planned it this way) he knows that biologically, Iris is kind of both/neither. I, uh, hope it'll work out, hahahah... 8D;;
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KimDingwall In reply to Laitma [2012-08-29 07:46:13 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes, makes sense!
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Laitma In reply to NicoSaba [2012-08-12 20:52:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I think, as I was re-writing this novel, it got quite a bit darker and grittier... Now, if only I can draw/paint that way-! xD
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Yukiko-berrie [2012-07-02 01:24:13 +0000 UTC]
I love this, everything you draw and write fro your novel just springs to life and I'm totally loving all your characters!! I think this would be even cooler if you had rain falling like with flash and lightning in the background.
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Laitma In reply to Yukiko-berrie [2012-07-03 02:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, gosh! ♥
Rain actually has significance in the novel--namely, that the world hasn't had rain in over a hundred years, so you could say I'm saving it for a very special point in the novel~ x)
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Laitma In reply to DeeDraws [2012-07-01 02:19:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, dear! I'm trying to to work on my lighting/mood, so definitely, thank you! ♥
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Laitma In reply to The-G [2012-07-01 02:47:51 +0000 UTC]
L-L-Like a flash comic or something, G? oAo;; I, I, I don't know... wow, that sounds... interesting!! Or like, a super-short clip of an animation???
MAN I AM THINKING ABOUT IT NOW.
/PONDERS PONDEROUSLY
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Laitma In reply to thecapturedspy [2012-07-01 02:42:33 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh, thank you! Trying to loosen up, I am! xD
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Laitma In reply to disrhythmic [2012-07-01 02:44:06 +0000 UTC]
Hahahah, the expressions of indifferent and exhausted? xD
Sorry don't mind me, I just... hahah I wonder if anyone could like my protagonist, he's such a loser...;;
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Laitma In reply to Uinn [2012-07-01 02:53:01 +0000 UTC]
Hahahahah, that's pretty much Seth... he never really wanted anything to do with this (or so he convinces himself), and he doesn't trust himself to be able to protect anyone, so it's very much a matter of Seth questioning why he's even doing what he's doing.
Thank you so much for your super-kind comment dear--ahhhhh you make me want to draw more for this story! *-*
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47ness [2012-06-28 14:50:42 +0000 UTC]
Looks awesome though, especially with those raw streaks running through the scene. Maybe if it had a hint of color in there to avoid too much grayness?
Sounds like you're on quite the mission over there...!
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Laitma In reply to 47ness [2012-07-01 02:51:33 +0000 UTC]
Hahahah! Well, Iris is literally meant to be a figure painted in gray. Barely any skin tone, gray eyes... terribly boring, I'm afraid. xD Seth has orange eyes but that's about it... oh, dear...
I'll try to push a little to lighten stuff up, though! Still working on mood/palettes...
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