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Published: 2018-04-30 21:53:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 851; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Aaaaaaaaaand that's all!!! The end!!Sorry if the ending feels a lil abrupt or it's all just kind of random--it was really just an exercise for me to practice comicking and try to work on a very emotion-heavy lil snippet hahah, but I hope that you guys enjoyed this, and thank you all so, so much for reading!!!! Your comments really meant so much to me and kept me going, thank you all so much!!!!!
I'll be taking a bit of a hiatus from comic page uploads for a while as I prep my script/concept art stuff for starting Iris proper, whoop!! Thank you all again for all of the love and support!!!!
(Now, just imagine Salim and Sariel going on to live a very happy life together and being a terrible cannibal murdercouple roflmao)
This comic is an AU from my story Iris .
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Comments: 36
Ah, this was so good! this comic had such a beautiful emotional arc, A+++++++
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Aaahhhhhhhhhhh thank you, I'm really glad to hear that-!!!!!!!! ;o;/
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WAIT SHIT THAT'S THE END OF IT???
NOOOO I WANTED TWENTY MORE CHAPTERS OF CUTE COUPLE ANTICS including but not limited to jean biting salim's fingers off
it's ok tho I forgive you because
*reads carefully again*
"starting iris proper"
"STARTING IRIS PROPER"
*raucous celebratory foghorns blasting in the distance*
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WAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH y-y-yeah, i-it's a thing, I'm really, finally trying to start it-!!!!! ;o; ;o; ;o;
....though I mean, knowing me, getting sidelined on twenty more chapters of AU Jean and Salim being cute or cannibalistic together sounds great to me too-!! 8D;;
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I WOULD BE OKAY WITH EITHER, JUST KEEP THE SAD TIMES COMING
*holds up #1 fan foam hand* go team laitma
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;o;/"
(are u ok with me being distracted from my own iris comic to work on a terrible certain other comic.................................... LMAO)
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I'M CRY
seriously though yeah what a great way to end this, the open space is both opressing and freeing gosh dang dude
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AAahhhhhhhhhhh I'm so glad to hear that, thank you so much for your kind words-!!!!!! >0< <3
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That was a wild emotional trip for me. I really love your comics, they are so wonderful and expressive, all the panels are full of emotions ;n;
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Aaahhhhhhhh, that really, really means a lot to me, thank you so so much for your kind words!!!!!! ;0; I'll try to keep making my terrible emotional comics, pahahahahah!!! XD
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Awww, even if it's super depressing, I'm glad it ended up with a.. dissolving the tension at least. =')
"Salim and Sariel going on to live a very happy life together and being a terrible cannibal murdercouple" -> sounds great... XD;
OMG, you are really gonna do Iris?! SO FREAKING AWESOME!
I am sooo looking forward to it! D8
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Ahahahahahaha, thank you!! I think, it's a little subtle, but Sariel is finally letting herself open up to Salim, it's a big step for her really~ :')
And hahahahaha, oh man yep, I'm still working on the thumbnails/script for chapter one, but yesss, Iris is finally happening, properly, from the beginning-!! XD
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Yeah, it seemed she made an effort here. ^u^
WOW, AWESOME! I'm so excited!
How long do you wanna work ahead with script and thumbnails before you release it? Do you wanna go chapter by chapter or go ahead at least half way through before getting into completing and sharing?
It's something I keep asking myself with one of my longer stories...
Because I realized how I keep changing my mind about details even in late stages and it would probably benefit for me make at least half of the story thumbnails before starting. But that sounds very painful to me, I wanna share it so bad and I would be too excited to finish chapters instead of keeping it all thumbnails and only start to work on the first chapter after the 500th page of thumbnails. XD;
No.. I don't think I can do that.
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Ahahahaahah, yeah same, I feel like I want to get it out page by page as soon as possible, things always change as I go anyway so no point in doing thumbs too far ahead-!
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I guess you are right. Then I will, too, just settle with having the overall script then work on thumbnails chapter by chapter.
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Aaaa dang!! I just want these two to be happy now ;-;
Tbh I think the pacing worked really well so don't sweat the ending dude! Can't wait to see what you do with these dudes n' the rest of the Iris cast later on down the line!
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Ahahahahahaha, I'm crying over the fact that I don't know when/where/if I'll ever even be able to show Salim since he's such a background/way back in the past character lMAO;;;;;;;;;; RIP;;;;;;;;;;
but thanks man, I'm really excited to get this ball rolling too!!
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O man rippppp, well at least we getta see him here then :,)
Good luck with the rest of Iris dude !!
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LMAO YEAH SORRY, I KEEP FORGETTING THIS FACT;;;;;;;;;;;
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yay for Sariel's emotional character development! Salim will catch your tearssss ; u ;
The hugssss ; u ; give the feelsss
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lmaaaoooooo yeeeessssssssss thank youuuu!! I feel like I did it in a really understated/soft way but this really is about Sariel finally opening up hahahaha~ <3 Thaaank you!
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GOOD JOB SARIEL!
emotioooooooooons
Another one finished! You're amazing!
We're all looking forward to Iris now 
Do you have a rough idea of when you want to start posting it?
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Pahahahaha!!! Good job indeed Sariel, you finally managed to let some of your true emotions out and not beat poor Salim to a pulp for it XDDD
And hmmmm, I'm hoping to start posting it in a few months, no hard estimate for now haha!! I'm still trying to hash out the script/thumbs for chapter 1, s-slow progress, I know;;;;
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Damn it yo this was a hecking ride! congrats yo. Really like I found the dialouge between Sariel and Salim to be really engauging, especially where Sariel said "you don't just get to put me back together." I really think that did a lot to show us what kind of character they are and what they have experianced.
I'm so looking forward to Iris, I'll be routing for ya the whole way.
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Aaaaahhhhhhhhh th-thank you so much man, I'm really honored to hear that-!! ;o; I really did love that one line best pahahahha, I'm glad you did too~ XD
And yeah, onwards and upwards-!! Th-th-thank you!! >o<
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You are very welcome.
Keep on keepin on yo <3
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B'awwww~ *gushes* (ノ*゜▽゜*)
*whispers*....now kiss
Seriously though, wonderful job! I'm so excited to read Iris >w< I'll be rooting for ya!
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Waaaahhhhhhhh th-thank you so much!!!! ;o; I'm gonna get to Iris soon as I can-!! >o<
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No pressure :3 my story is taking longer than I'd hoped to hash out =3=
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pahahahh, duuuude it always does-!! Writing takes forEEEVERRRR!! I'm just trying to hash out my first scene right now and it's such a pain, suuuch slow goings!! XD
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Same here! I keep getting slowed down by concerns of what I might want to do later on TTUTT do you know how you want your story to end yet? Cause I'm pretty torn at the moment {⊙○⊙}
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Oooohhhhhhhh hmmmm!! This comment is super-belated sry lmao but yeah, I do know the ending-!! I think it's pretty useful to have in your mind as you try to figure out your story so you know your overall themes/messages, that being said it can still be a bit of a tossup though-!
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No worries : ) Life has had me tossing about lately, so I haven't been very active. I've been seeing your posts on Instagram though! All great as usual >w<
Yeah, the ending is really throwing me. I can't tell how I want things to go. Part of me wants a 'happy ending' scenario...and the other part of me is like 'MAKE EM CRY!!!' >w<;;; Anyway, it'll probably be a while before I can start on it. Ahhhh life, why you so hard? TTuTT
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hoooo, what an emotional whirlwind for these kids ;_____;;;;;;;; You convey emotions beautifully and your pacing and build up is wonderful and well timed! I'm happy that you saw this comic through to the end and that you're on to the next project, good luck on your hiatus Laitma! I'm sure you'll be back to awe us with a plethora of concepts and illustrations soon enough!
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Waaaahhhhhhhhh, and thank YOU so much for the continual feedback and support, you're too friggin' kind to me, I know I say this every time but I genuinely mean it, thank you so much for being such an incredible person~ ;=;
I'm workin' on Iris!!! Better get crackin' on those pages-!!! >o<
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It's always my pleasure, you know it Laitma! I'm more than happy to support you!
Good luck!
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