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Laiyee — Secret Attack

Published: 2008-12-19 05:55:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1630; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 86
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Description I originally wanted to claim that she is an assassin, but I figured that a little blade (if you even call it that, and not a piece of plastic) wouldn't be able to kill anyone, so yeah.

But now the problem is, I don't know how "secretive" she can really be if she wears those bright-coloured and extravagant clothing. It didn't look right with black though.

If anyone is interested, yes, that's L on the wanted notice. I searched through my .psd files for an outline with line weight (so it'd look like it was drawn in ink), and that was the only one I could find. I could choose Light instead, but his hair style looked too modern. ;D

ADVANCED CRITIQUE ENCOURAGED. Something's wrong with it, but I don't know what. >_>

Edit:
Arm shorted
Added highlights to her face to make it a bit more 3-D
Darkened the background
Unsaturated the wanted notice
Darkened the hair on top of head (less highlights)
Changed designs on her outer "jacket"

Hope it looks better.
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Comments: 18

sonia613 [2011-12-28 03:57:43 +0000 UTC]

this is so beautiful.

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Kakumei-Tifa [2010-07-23 05:40:44 +0000 UTC]

This is so pretty! I really like the colors you used!

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Tiffli [2010-04-15 10:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Lol "L - most wanted" i just couldnt imagine that XD. Its wery cool drawing :3.

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Soirsce [2009-02-11 12:17:24 +0000 UTC]

ooh this is so cute~

The main thing that I see wrong is that her pointer finger should be shorter than her middle finger, and less highlight on the whole hand

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InvaderSTELLAR [2009-01-13 00:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Hello, Laiyee!
Aw! What an adorable piece of artwork you have created here! I love the soft colours you used in this piece of artwork!

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arelhy [2008-12-23 04:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Wooow!!.. i love it!

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CarmenMCS [2008-12-20 21:52:17 +0000 UTC]

I love it so much, really cute combo of colors and her face is just so pretty!

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Moon-Blood [2008-12-20 03:12:43 +0000 UTC]

I think she looks great, I love her outfit, but it would be difficult to stay hidden in that

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Laiyee In reply to Moon-Blood [2008-12-20 05:25:50 +0000 UTC]

I definitely agree. XD Do you have any suggestions for possible colours?

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Moon-Blood In reply to Laiyee [2008-12-20 20:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Maybe blues and blacks? It's hard to say, I just love those colors

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Laiyee In reply to Moon-Blood [2008-12-20 22:40:46 +0000 UTC]

Just tried it. It didn't look right with a red background. Maybe if it was a night sky..

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Kefka750 [2008-12-19 17:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Excellent work!

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AbaraisSoulmate [2008-12-19 15:00:15 +0000 UTC]

This is great The L poster is funny She's a beautiful character!

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kitty4eva [2008-12-19 10:39:40 +0000 UTC]

I think she looks kinda happy, she has a very slight smile which makes it look odd to me.

Maybe if you try to alter the scarfe to cover her facial expression would help.

Good picture tho, love your art!

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Laiyee In reply to kitty4eva [2008-12-19 14:16:06 +0000 UTC]

I thought it would be some kind of confident smile, saying, "You're dead."

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rJoyceyy In reply to kitty4eva [2008-12-19 10:56:25 +0000 UTC]

Maybe shes at her hapiest when on the hunt

Good picture

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Yakkov [2008-12-19 09:14:12 +0000 UTC]

This is really good ^^ I do not see any problem with this picture at all. Nice Death Note reference^^

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rebellious-rebellion [2008-12-19 05:57:42 +0000 UTC]

very good work
i really like it
and she can be secretive she blends in with the masses XD
but very good work i like it
and i love the L wanted poster

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