Reanimated4now [2010-03-30 00:42:17 +0000 UTC]
'Her last words were lost amidst the tears, and she fell on the floor, hiding her face in her arms.'
Except it's out in a field right? So it wouldn't be the floor then.
You've managed to capture the characters portrayed well, I could really feel my way through this almost effortlessly.
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Larenthi In reply to Reanimated4now [2010-03-30 16:48:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh, of course. Hhaha, my bad. Thanks for catching that.
Thanks I'm glad that you liked it :] I always try hard with characters.. I tend to put them before the story itself.
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