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LaVioletta — Intruder Alert

Published: 2011-03-07 05:33:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1455; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 43
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Description "You damn bastards..." Varya cursed as she knelt beside the pile of bodies that were her comrades in the computer room of the Arabella. "You're going to pay for this..."

Outside in the hallway, the Escorians patrolled, looking for more of the crew to slaughter. They'd managed to miss Varya somehow, leaving the green-skinned Orion alive. Now, she was furious. With her green eyes narrowed and angry, she picked up a hand-laser. Standing slowly, she moved toward the door.

Varya moved into the corridor, laser ready. Listening carefully, she heard the big aliens moving about the corridor. One of them approached, and the Orion pressed herself against the wall. She knew this was the one who'd killed her friends. She would not let it escape.

The Escorian walked along the corridor of the Federation ship, weapon in hand. Another of the weak, tiny creatures would soon show its face, and he would destroy it as he had so many others. Ahead was a three-way break in the hall. Hitting a comms panel on his arm, the big alien spoke.

"Ahm. Sh'ya vaquli," he reported. "Nash kapala rham." His fingers tightened on the handle of his raygun.

Around the next corner waited Varya. She was completely invisible to the invader, and that's what she wanted. She set her laser for setting three... The kill setting.

Let's see how you scream, she thought, A little squeal, a little shout! Varya waited until the very last moment. That was when she would begin her covert strike back against the invaders.

Invaders who would feel the revenge of her green animal blood.



Art © La Violetta
Story ©
Star Trek © CBS
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Comments: 17

FrizzoPirate [2012-01-21 00:38:00 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME! I love her expression! NICE JOB!!!

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LaVioletta In reply to FrizzoPirate [2012-01-22 08:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Glad you like how she looks.

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StraySinapse [2011-03-18 03:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Nice, you convey a tense mood well.

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LaVioletta In reply to StraySinapse [2011-03-20 00:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks.

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DoctorBollocks [2011-03-12 04:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Ah good love the science fiction space marine, totally.

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LaVioletta In reply to DoctorBollocks [2011-03-12 05:10:37 +0000 UTC]

That evil lizard from outer space, you mean?

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DoctorBollocks In reply to LaVioletta [2011-03-12 05:23:25 +0000 UTC]

yes..totes

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overlordofkings [2011-03-11 16:30:58 +0000 UTC]

Great work and story as always. I always loved it when a heroine had to covertly take out her enemies, one by one.

I always love the expression on Varya's face. You don't even need to read the story to tell that she's pissed.

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LaVioletta In reply to overlordofkings [2011-03-12 05:11:42 +0000 UTC]

It's very much got this "Die Hard on a spaceship" feel, huh?

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overlordofkings In reply to LaVioletta [2011-03-13 22:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Yep, expect replace terrorists with alien lizards and replace Bruce Willis with a sexy Orion

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rajee [2011-03-07 13:14:27 +0000 UTC]

Great artwork.

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LaVioletta In reply to rajee [2011-03-07 18:48:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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rajee In reply to LaVioletta [2011-03-07 19:07:50 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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Yumeshunketsu777 [2011-03-07 11:00:54 +0000 UTC]

God, you keep posting so much artwork this week. Heheh I need to comment on all of them now >/w/<

But another beautiful picture, equally matched with a great story ;D

It's great to see Varya again though, hehehe she's as beautiful as ever~ But it's a shame what's she's going through right now. But I think she will be fine. Nothing is stronger than the scorn of a woman after all. Or so I've heard >w>;;;

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LaVioletta In reply to Yumeshunketsu777 [2011-03-07 18:53:16 +0000 UTC]

I have been cranking them out in the last few days. I wonder how long this momentum will last...

Thanks for the kind words on the picture. Admit it, though. While dangerous, it's far, far more exciting to see these heroines in such dire situations.

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Bundorgh19 [2011-03-07 10:25:20 +0000 UTC]

Interesting story. ^^

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LaVioletta In reply to Bundorgh19 [2011-03-07 18:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much!

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