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artfulwriter [2019-06-17 05:05:49 +0000 UTC]
did you ever make an ending to this?
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lazywolf In reply to artfulwriter [2019-06-21 04:52:07 +0000 UTC]
I have a master document with all my notes and edits I've done/want to do and my very rough draft for the ending...
At this point, though--after this many years--I really doubt the story will ever be finished
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artfulwriter In reply to lazywolf [2019-06-23 02:19:27 +0000 UTC]
can we talk about what the ending would be like, in privite maybe? i remember reading this in high school and been dying to find out.
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lazywolf In reply to artfulwriter [2019-06-25 05:09:09 +0000 UTC]
Ok, you win
Seth - Epilogue
The resulting scandal lead to several resignations and high-profile legal battles between the military and state government and several insurance companies. Fortunately, besides providing testimony, the surviving Sorensens, myself, and my parents didn’t have to be too heavily involved. The deaths of American citizens, illegal use of military force against American citizens, unauthorized use of military resources, a destroyed helicopter and hummer, the deaths of several soldiers, illegal memory drug experimentation on soldiers, and of course our destroyed home. Of course, the documentation of Harper’s true motives having been destroyed, along with the military base we’d entered. There was nothing (human) to tie us back to any of the scenes, and the whole situation appeared to investigators to be some kind of unexplained personal vendetta of Harper against our two families illegally utilizing military resources while passing them
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tekkitkid99 [2017-01-22 07:28:32 +0000 UTC]
When I first started reading this story, I was having trouble getting a sense of Seth's character, but then I realized he is like a non-lazy version of me! Of course I mean an unmedicated non-lazy version of me. (Hard to be excessively energetic when you are VERY heavily medicated for ADHD. Meds also contribute to my laziness.)
All in all though an excellent story that I have enjoyed reading!
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lazywolf In reply to tekkitkid99 [2017-01-22 22:40:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading! Glad you were able to identify with Seth a bit
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Septavius0 [2016-03-08 22:01:17 +0000 UTC]
This was beautiful,
*cough*youshouldtrytogetthispublished*cough*
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Legojoe [2016-01-17 02:10:44 +0000 UTC]
During this read I have chuckled, sobbed and was downright shocked. Great read!
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lazywolf In reply to Legojoe [2016-01-17 04:13:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
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WolfSkullForge [2014-09-28 03:04:46 +0000 UTC]
I felt like I was reading a legit published book!! You could get a real feel for the characters. But I was so sad when Em died.
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lazywolf In reply to WolfSkullForge [2014-09-29 06:53:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your comments; I'm glad you liked it!
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juju712 [2013-10-30 23:17:32 +0000 UTC]
Excellent closure.
I still don't like Em's death, but you pretty well wrapped things aroud it, so it balances.
Rest only one question and the incertanity for the future.
Is a next part still in plan? Or is your motivation loss still actual?
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lazywolf In reply to juju712 [2013-11-03 03:54:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading and thanks for the comments, I appreciate it!
Someday I might finish this, but as of right now I have little desire to do so.
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Dezirea [2013-07-25 09:40:19 +0000 UTC]
this was a great read!
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lazywolf In reply to BlackwolfLW [2013-04-30 03:00:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Glad you thought it was good.
Yeah, admittedly I didn't like killing Em either; that's just how it turned out.
As for the ending, there's supposed to be more; basically tying off all the loose ends and going from there. As it is, I just haven't put it together completely yet. I may even end up merging it into the current chapter 13; we'll see.
Anyway, thanks again for the read!
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marianams8910 [2013-02-03 09:50:49 +0000 UTC]
That story is AWESOMEE!!!
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lazywolf In reply to marianams8910 [2013-02-04 04:12:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the faves; I'm glad you like it!
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Moonlit-Rebel [2013-01-27 19:21:40 +0000 UTC]
I really love this story! Would you like me to add it into the Werewriters gallery so it would get more viewers?
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WolfRevolver [2012-01-13 05:32:24 +0000 UTC]
I really like this story. In every werewolf movie, they try to make werewolves seem like beasts who are mindless killers, but thats not how I see them. up until I read this story i didnt think anyone else thought the same way. I only came across your page and DA itself on accident, because I wasnted to carve a werewolf pumpkin. i ended up reading your story. thank you.
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sx227 [2011-12-21 04:15:57 +0000 UTC]
great story I really enjoyed it but it does kind of make me sad that he had to go through so much in so little time
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sx227 In reply to lazywolf [2011-12-23 11:56:11 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome to have a Merry Christmas
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Nova-Nocturne [2011-10-01 01:59:01 +0000 UTC]
ok so I pretty much spent a day reading this whole story through, and since I kinda got too much into it to comment on every chapter, this comment goes out to all of them:
You are a fantastic writer. It has so many unexpected twists and audience-grabbing material. it was definately an original story. I liked how it included elements of various genres, making it a more versatilely appealing novel. Excellent work *applauds*
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Ko12n [2011-09-28 21:45:02 +0000 UTC]
you made my heart beating damn fast, every moments. I could not pause for a second and I've skipped the dinner because I urged to know what's going to be next. I would say this one is my most! favorite novel ever!!.
I do love your story.
dammit i couldn't express my feeling, anyhow. English is not my mother tongue. I love love love this story!!!.
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Leonca [2011-08-19 04:42:07 +0000 UTC]
A nice bittersweet resolution. Also interesting to see that some people are resistant to being changed.
I could see her pupils start to go gold.
Is this supposed to be irises?
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jmillart [2011-08-15 15:37:36 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. I see you've tricked us! I suppose the epilogue should be grand then!
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CrazeyWulf [2011-08-13 23:45:37 +0000 UTC]
I haven't read it yet, but I know its going to be awesome, I got very excited when I saw this in my message box thing and I just had to express my little fan-girl joy in a comment, Thank you.
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Jacques-Chat [2011-08-13 23:23:48 +0000 UTC]
Great Job and a suiting result.
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Rydrake011 [2011-08-13 23:16:38 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed it as well. I wonder if every thing will turn okay for everyone one way or another.
Also this story brings a saying to mind. The saying is this, "When God closes a door, He opens another."
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