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Published: 2007-09-09 19:14:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 8981; Favourites: 79; Downloads: 60
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Description "...Kakashi?!
The inner scream of pain and confusion was abruptly cut off. Iruka shut down. The strict yet kind teacher; Naruto's 'big brother'; Kakashi's friend and occasional lay...doors slammed shut in his mind, locking away all that wasn't necessary for immediate survival.
The Chuunin got swiftly to his feet, kunai ready in defense, controlling the pain with a small flash of concentration and two deep breaths.
His mobility was reduced on the right side, but he could still strike accurately if he didn't extend too far....."



story ยฉ maldoror_gw


I'm sorry for the really long wait, but I finally made it....
I also got my monitor back!! so I'm sure this'll take a lot less time to update
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art by: me!!

story by: maldoror_gw
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Comments: 22

Yksesh [2008-08-14 15:15:25 +0000 UTC]

The three panels at the top are wonderful, I like how the different manners of coloring give them different feeling, emotions aside from what they represent. Iruka's fierce eye is also right on the spot.

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ledyninja [2008-02-23 00:45:20 +0000 UTC]

a mi tambien me gusta iruka quisciera que me regalaras un dibujo de iruka dibujas lindo please soy fan de este chico

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Minamieda [2007-10-06 13:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Go Iruka!

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Lei-sam In reply to Minamieda [2007-10-13 15:55:42 +0000 UTC]

hahaha

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Minamieda In reply to Lei-sam [2007-10-13 21:20:20 +0000 UTC]

And young Iruka looks so cute too *3*

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ZpanSven [2007-09-21 02:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Excellent page! I love the metaphorical slamming of the doors in the corridor representing Iruka's mind

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Lei-sam In reply to ZpanSven [2007-10-13 18:27:39 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!! I was a bit afraid it would be confusing, but I'm glad it turned out ok

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ZpanSven In reply to Lei-sam [2007-10-17 00:11:47 +0000 UTC]

*gives thumbs up* it turned out great!

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Samurai0Baevie [2007-09-10 15:30:16 +0000 UTC]

i love this story and this page is my favourite..
especially the doors and whats behind them..
keep up the awesome work!!

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Lei-sam In reply to Samurai0Baevie [2007-09-15 04:49:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!!
I'm really glad you're liking the story so far!!
I appreciate the comment!!!

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Angecornu [2007-09-10 12:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Iruka's so cute ^-^

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Lei-sam In reply to Angecornu [2007-09-15 04:51:37 +0000 UTC]

heheh yeah, he's a cuttie isn't he

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Lizmun [2007-09-10 04:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Aaah... so Angst! x_x
As always, beautiful job here! The first row was just squee-worthy, and that's what makes it hard to just imagine how hard and painful it must be for Iruka as well to push that all aside!

Awesome awesome job!

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Lei-sam In reply to Lizmun [2007-09-15 05:02:10 +0000 UTC]

hahahha
thank you!!!
yeah, I tried to picture Iruka on very thight dilema, and his struggle wthin, I'm really glad I managed to reflect it!
thanks!!!!

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LyNNe000 [2007-09-09 23:29:13 +0000 UTC]

nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! paginas nuevas!!! *__*
me quiero robar al pequenio Iruka!!! >3<

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Lei-sam In reply to LyNNe000 [2007-09-15 05:07:32 +0000 UTC]

jajajjaja, quedรณ lindito verdad? jajajja

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LyNNe000 In reply to Lei-sam [2007-09-15 19:48:26 +0000 UTC]

seee!!!!! >w< ~

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LyNNe000 [2007-09-09 23:25:34 +0000 UTC]

nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! paginas nuevas!!! *__*
me quiero robar al pequenio Iruka!!! >3<

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Felina555 [2007-09-09 20:17:21 +0000 UTC]

awww, Iruka as kid is so cute !!! love his eyes. the motion blur in some of the panels is nice touch!

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Lei-sam In reply to Felina555 [2007-09-15 05:09:49 +0000 UTC]

hahha thank you!!!!!
although it's taking me considerably more time doing the pages this way, but I'm really glad they're turning out alright

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Nyxes [2007-09-09 19:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Haa! I love first panel!!!So niceeeeeeeee little Ruka, brother Ruka and Ruka in love haaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

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Lei-sam In reply to Nyxes [2007-09-15 05:10:28 +0000 UTC]

heeh thanks

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