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VanadiumTaintedBeryl [2013-02-25 18:59:37 +0000 UTC]
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I love the concept. I play piano as well, and can totally relate to the idea that playing music can take you to other places. I also like your color choices. They are very soft and dreamy, and combined with the delicacy of the vines and plumes, you have made a very intricate and lovely world in the musical ethers.
I think that the composition for this piece, given the ideas that you would like to convey, could be on the more fluid and circular side of things. Everything that is going on with this piece in happening right in the center, with the three diagonal lines shooting out. While I agree that there is quite a bit of music out there that could be visually described as "linear," (the marches of John Philip Sousa come to mind) to me, it seems like the music that you are trying to describe is the kind that ebbs and flows, rises and falls, fills you and makes your heart swell and then gently leaves, giving you the feeling that you have just experienced something wonderful. In my view, that kind of music moves like water, or smoke perhaps.
Although you did mention that the notes being played are on the dissonant side of things, so maybe you wanted the harsh lines of dissonance to cut through the peaceful mood you had set up?
I think it would be cool to see the music as a device to lead the eyes around the word. As it sits now, the eyes stay in one spot primarily. You could have the music sort of tendril its way around. Soft, curious, moving, exploring.
Anyway, that's what I think of that. Really pretty piece though, as far as I am concerned. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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BenJogan [2014-01-22 18:28:13 +0000 UTC]
I love the line patterns but I wonder what the right hand is doing... seems like a wide glissando.
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LennyThynn In reply to BenJogan [2014-01-23 07:48:43 +0000 UTC]
And you have it spot on - it is a glissando. Unfortunately the reference I used was my own hand, without a mirror or keyboard at that moment available, so it is most probably not extremely accurate ;D
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BenJogan In reply to LennyThynn [2014-01-23 16:58:27 +0000 UTC]
No no, at the contrary it's pretty accurate. It's just that I couldn't really see the "dynamic" of the movement. It's very well drawn indeed.
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BenJogan In reply to LennyThynn [2014-01-30 22:12:23 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome!
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BenJogan [2014-01-22 18:24:51 +0000 UTC]
That's great!
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AkumaRedClown [2013-02-19 18:44:46 +0000 UTC]
realy cool dude, nice way of using the pink and you realy did a great work inproving your sketch. simply awsome
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Spellprints [2013-02-15 08:44:35 +0000 UTC]
this is just wonderful and inspiring!
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TheMoub [2013-02-09 11:41:29 +0000 UTC]
As a pianist, I just have to love that piece! <3
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DissolveNeurotic [2013-02-09 05:52:21 +0000 UTC]
I really love the soft coloration you used.
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Espada-Kitsuki [2013-01-25 14:56:57 +0000 UTC]
I'd been meaning to fave this one but procrastinated and got too lazy! I really love the colours and the hand positions in this piece. You're a wonderful artist!
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LennyThynn In reply to Espada-Kitsuki [2013-02-01 11:45:46 +0000 UTC]
Lolol don't worry, we all know how it is XD Thank you!<3
(Also, don't play the notes he's playing. They sound horrible.)
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Lumenvel [2013-01-04 23:11:58 +0000 UTC]
YOU DID IT!
I remember that awesomesauced sketch and you told me you were prolly going to make it into a bigger pic.. and here it is! <3
I totally love the artwork here! I like the background plants (are they plants?) and the beams the keys shoot after being pressed on! It's a really nice mix of music and art, those two things blend really well here. It's just awesomesauced and amazing at that!
I simply fell in love with this one.. I wish I could hang it up on my wall..
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Lumenvel In reply to LennyThynn [2013-01-07 07:14:30 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! And really no one noticed those?! What a shame... it's such an original touch..
Mmhmm sounds really good, always looking forward for your art!
*cheers* <3<3
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dynamite-factory [2013-01-01 12:15:38 +0000 UTC]
beautiful work *w* i absolutely love the colours and the FINGERS ON HIS LEFT HAND DSLFKJFH
this is a brilliant piece~
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dynamite-factory In reply to LennyThynn [2013-01-01 13:24:14 +0000 UTC]
ahhh no worries!! all your hard work really paid off, everything looks amazing.
;W;
oh yeah, happy new year's!
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LennyThynn In reply to Crazy4Dragons [2013-01-01 11:29:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so very much!<3 I'm glad you enjoy my work Especially this piece. Since I like it so much, I'm happier than usual if other people like it too<3
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